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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 04, 2006
    Cara: Actually I took a midi file of "Hedwig's Song" and rendered its parts to all violin, then rendered it again to an mp3 file. I plan to put a link to the violin version when I come to that part on my own website, but I will include the link to the streaming file when I post the chapter that corresponds with it on AFF. :)
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 04, 2006
    'Pussy-whipped' HAHAAHA. omg that was hilarious.
    I liked the part with Albus yelling at the ministry. So sad about Minerva...'the only woman he had ever loved intimately..' that really intrigued me. No one really knows anything about Dumbledore's past...it would be interesting to hear something from his POV. though, without sex of course. :(
    Two chapters in one day...that was a real treat. Thank you thank you.
    But damn now I have to download hedwig's song to see what all the fuss is about.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 04, 2006
    As bad as Simon? He's worse.
    He can actually hex you.

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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 04, 2006
    I knew it! I knew he was a Harper.. but the only one?!? =O
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 04, 2006
    I still keep thinking of Severus scowling during orgasm and his whole "no that was premature ejaculation" part from the last chapter. xD And the lemons are good, so no worries.
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 04, 2006
    Excellent chapter. Very accurate with the musical terms. *applauds* I await chapter 20
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 03, 2006
    Oooooooh, for some weird reason right in the middle of the chapter when he was staring at the sheet music and was guessing what the notes were I figured he probably plays something, and it better be a fucking violin. But holy shit, what a violin it is! I cant wait for the next chapterrrrs! =D
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 03, 2006
    I agree with Ms Figg when she said not having Hermione as a masochist and Snape as a rough rider wouldn't work. God you'd have to love pain when you're with him.
    And I think this story is unpredictable, like most of her other ones so far that I've read. She's introduced some different Hermione's and Snape's into the past and I come into reading her stories trying not to expect a certain Snape because she'll complete surprise me. And that's just the characters, her plots are even more unpredictable. I would have never guessed Snape would be the Harper.

    The rape scene totally went over my head. After I read it I didn't even think of rape. I still don't think it was a rape scene because Hermione consented before he had anal sex with her, and he even lubed her. I think he was surprisingly tender with her as he would not have been if he was raping her.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 03, 2006
    that was every every interesting pillow talk between severus and mione... and man it will blow mione mind when she finds out about severus is a harper.. please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 03, 2006
    A Harper?
    Ohhhh you're good Ms Figg, you are good. =D
    Great chapter, I really would love to hear Snape play the violin. One of my favourite instruments...and I wouldn't mind riding his instrument of pleasure, either. hehe
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 03, 2006
    Landa: I realized I didn't answer another question, about the "rape" warning. None of my stories are plotted in advance, so I really don't know exactly what they will contain until I actually write it. In this instance, space for details is also an issue. I will have to rewrite the details again to include "non-consenual" and "anal" which another reader complained about and I apologized for. They don't give you much room. I wish there was an all-inclusive term. Maybe "Warning: Unsavory Sexual Acts Possible" might cover until the story is actually finished. I'll have to think about that.
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 03, 2006
    I absolutely love this story. I cannot wait for you to update it!
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 03, 2006
    Landa: Actually that post I placed here on AFF was first placed on my own review boards to...shall we say two more in-depth reviews on my own site. It wasn't a tailored response to the comments here, more like, well let the readers know where I stand period. I welcome both positive and negative reviews, especially con-crits. As far as the OMG's go, that's fine...but I've been in actual critique sessions where I've had my work shredded to my face no matter who gushed over it. lol. Of course that was poetry, not stories. And poets can be ugly. Anyway,as a result I'm about as sensitive as a rock when writing. My soul isn't invested in these stories, even if my libido is. If you've read my stories...there are elements about both Hermione and Severus that do remain the same throughout my stories...sort of my own kind of AU canon...the Potions Master as a snarky rough riding sex god and Hermione being a masochist...if she weren't there would be no way the two could tangle. There are some subtle differences in this Severus and Hermione however. He doesn't begin as a rough-riding sex god, and she is fully aware she is a masochist. Remember I am portraying characters that I see in a particular way, in different situations. It is the plot surrounding the couple that makes it interesting imo, as well as their interactions based on that plot. It is the plot that is (hopefully) unpredictable. Anyone who reads my stories knows that whatever happens, Severus and Hermione are going to end up together. Period. Happily or unhappily :::shrugs::: so far happily. As for my shields, well, they've been down and were only raised so I could regain my focus on the storyline...now I am flying through perfectly clear white space, tapping out this tale. As for looking for me, I haven't gone anywhere my dear. Trust me, I'm still here. :) Thank you for your comments.
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  • From ANON - myers on October 03, 2006
    Three words:

    1. Get
    2. A
    3. Britpicker
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  • From ANON - Landa on October 03, 2006
    I find it interesting that after a few reviews that don't go along with the "OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY *SQUEE*" view that most of your readers have, that you feel it necessary to say that we can "say whatever" we want, but you'll keep writing. Well, of course you will - it IS your story, after all. And your saying that it is "The first and last time" you'll address the issue of the rape is fine too - again, your story. But it seems as if you are perhaps a little too sensitive because you're getting reviews that aren't babbling "OMG"s and heaping praise upon you. IMO, you had to know that the rape would knock people a little "off kilter" yet you didn't put a warning on the chapter...was it on purpose?
    When you started writing fic here, it was fresh and totally different - especially your portrayals of the sexual encounters...but now, the story remains the same even though the surrounding details change. Snape is thrown together with Hermione and Shazam! a masochist (who most of the time doesn't even know she IS one) is born. Where is the wildly unpredictable Ms_Figg that I used to know and read? If anyone finds her, I hope they let me know. You don't need to raise your shields, you just need to see through them a little bit.
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