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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Cara on October 03, 2006
    Wow...it's always to the point of exhaustion with snape huh? She even fell asleep lol.
    Great chapter, awesome...'action'.
    I hope a relationship of some sort will form maybe later on, because even though your action scenes are flaming hot, emotion from both of them would add a lot to the story. Seems like you're already starting the passion going...snape thinking hermione is beautiful? Really tender. Erm, not his ministrations of course. Just a sweet moment in the middle of rough sex.
    Hope you feel better!
    -Cara
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 03, 2006
    aww I hope you feel better soon. and lol it was really good. I loved the lemons. and they do seem quite smitten lol. I cannot wait til you update again. but I understand. hope you get well soon. update when you can please. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 02, 2006
    oh my, what a cliffe. XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2006
    mooooooooore
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 02, 2006
    Omg you can't give us that hot chapter and leave us hanging by a thread!!
    damn damn. :/

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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 02, 2006
    Oh dear. Hermione certainly knows how to inadvertantly goad a man into action!! xD
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 02, 2006
    yay lots of steamy smut!!! lol omg that was sooo funny. I don't think Hermione should goad Severus too much I mean he's just getting started it seems. lol it also seems they are perfectly matched in that department. I cannot wait to see what happens next, Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on October 02, 2006
    Heh heh heh! Brilliant! I read this at work (!) and grinned all the way through!
    I can't wait for the next part!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 02, 2006
    ~lol~ that was great .. man one would think she did that just to go again .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would lvoe to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 02, 2006
    Surely you don't have more important things to do than write this story? =p
    Oh I really like it so far.
    Snape must have been irked or something when she said she was just a toy for him. What a silly man.
    More chapters, please!
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 02, 2006
    My nose thanks you? xDDD


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  • From ANON - lisa on October 01, 2006
    omg just when it was getting good man lol. love it. please update soon. I can't wait to see how Snape adds up in Hermione's book. If he's all she's been hoping he was. Keep up the good work. goodluck.
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on October 01, 2006
    Gah! I want the lemon.......you have my full attention now!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2006
    gahh for making us all wait till next chapter for the lemon.

    *sigh*
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on October 01, 2006
    Oh, gods, how much do I love Cedric! Love to hate him , that is! "Threaten me again......." what a classic.....

    This is great, keep on......I'm still laughing at the pervy shopman now!!
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