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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - elektrik_storm on October 27, 2006
    omg! fantastic! is there going to be a sequel???

    please email me! paris@mail2leo.com
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  • From ANON - tash on October 27, 2006
    One of the better Snape/Hermoine stories out there. Loved the ending, can't see where this takes you.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 27, 2006
    Hmmm... I loved the wedding. I am glad that Hermione and Severus are so happy together, that was wonderful

    But I did not liek the ending. It was very good, but I still don't like it. That he would turn out so evil. That was not good, but everything else was.
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  • From ANON - annie on October 27, 2006
    holy shit!!!! you made bara the next dark lord?!?!?! whooooa totally DID NOT!! see that one coming!!! haha very nice twist there ms figg very nice indeed!! wow! what a great story!! i'm glad severus and hermione married finally it was gooood..can't wait for the next story!! see you there!!
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  • From ANON - wikkidgothbabe on October 27, 2006
    Great story, BUT...
    Oooh how could you make that sweet child the next Voldemort?!?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 26, 2006
    Yes. I thought it was about time for a truly dark ending. Bara was a sweet child, but I imagine every despot that ever lived had something good and innocent in them before they became what they were. I imagine Bara's reign will be different from Voldemort in that he does not have wizards and witches under him, no one that could move up in the ranks or take him out with magic. In fact, most likely he would destroy anyone with magical tendencies to protect himself. He is creating an army.

    I never really did a dark ending before and as an author I have to explore, otherwise let's face it, writing could become dull for me. I've also never done a sad ending either. One day I am going to have to cross that bridge too, though I can honestly say at this point I'm not looking forward to that. But, I still think it will be some time before I do go that route. I love HG/SS and like to see them with happy endings. But as an author...it's like there is something in me that says, "yeah you like them being happy, but you know it can't always be that way." So I'm waiting for that dragon to raise its head. I'd like to thank everyone for all the reviews given for this story, and for sticking it out to the end. I think something for Halloween is in order next. See you next story. ML. **** Ruth
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  • From ANON - sheedy on October 26, 2006
    Another rousing success!
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  • From ANON - raven on October 26, 2006
    fan-frickin-tastic! i love your work.
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  • From ANON - thing 1 on October 26, 2006
    A darker ending then usual but, let's face it, that's life. Again, a very well written story. I can't wait for the next one!!!
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  • From ANON - mekareami on October 26, 2006
    Thanks for tying up the loose ends... though now I wonder what Bari will be up to. As always thank you very much for writing. It is a joy to see several new chapters on a story per day. I look forward to the next work!
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 26, 2006
    All good things must come to an end. DAMNIT! -.- Loved it. Absolutely Loooooooovvveeed it! One of my favorite reads of ze Fanfiction world in many many years! =P
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 26, 2006
    OMG ARE YOU FOR REAL??? I had such high hopes for that boy......please please please tell me there will be a sequel
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2006
    *sigh* no more cute, innocent, bara.

    loved the story though. the cliff hanger worked out nicely in the end, though i sure didnt enjoy it when reading. but yep...shall see you next story!

    if you ever get bored, you should so add an epilouge part 2 about when severus and hermione do have kids and what its like when they go to school and such... heck, maybe even a story...like when bara is leading all the untouchables...or maybe not. it might be too parallel to the real hp. ah well. i'm sure you're next story will be great (just like all your others) and i'm looking forward to reading!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 26, 2006
    wow .. so in the end bara became the new dark lord .... that was great i love it .. i cant wait in till your next story... in till then later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 26, 2006
    Oh this was a great story. Will you be starting another story soon?
    I'm disappointed about Bara though. Too bad he fell to the dark side.

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