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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - angel on September 30, 2006
    wow .... that was great ... hmm is sev a harper....... i would lvoe to read mroe .. please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Kris on September 30, 2006
    Oooooooooooh, I seriously cant wait to see the next chapter! hahahahahaha XD
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 29, 2006
    Clitoral piercing??? "They all want me" ??? EWWW. >.< NO THANKS.

    Yeah but the dildo sounds interesting, and a nice run in with Ginny. :)
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  • From ANON - angel on September 29, 2006
    man .. eli sure did tell mione off.. will eli tell snape what yelled about .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Ms_Figg on September 29, 2006
    MysticF: I have to disagree with your claim that "girls get nothing out of anal sex". I get a lot of requests from female anal enthusiasts to add at least one anal lemon scene from time to time. It seems to be an act that suits both sexes. :) Then again, different strokes for different folks :::claps hand to face::: I can't believe I wrote that. lol.
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  • From ANON - luce on September 29, 2006
    Severus might be perving on something he shouldn't with his magic mirrors. Love Hermione in the sex shop LOL LOL. Go Ginny go! Cedric just creeps me out. Ugh! Hmmm, maybe Ginny and Hermione should get together ;-) Hey, nothing said about her being with witches was there? Might fire Severus up a bit. (Like he needs it. LOL) Somehow I can't see him being that sort... but... I'll stop now, I may have had one Baileys too many.

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  • From Magali on September 29, 2006
    I just read the first chapter and liked it very much, it seems you're up to yet another fantastic fic... I like the way you describe things. Good job
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  • From ANON - MysticF on September 28, 2006
    I must admit you are my favourite author on this site. Your fics have a way of dragging me into them, you have original ideas and I love the lemons, though I wish you didn't use anal sex so much... it's just not the same as in a slash fic, girls get nothing out of it... anywaaay, passing the thought of Hermione running for the bathroom... Very cold Severus there, I don't think she should forgive him unless something drastic changes... The man is such a mystery that anything is possible, but I'd like to think he has "some" redeeming qualities! Of course he does! I like the idea of Harry as a vegetable, for some reason that seems a good enough sacrifice without his actually dying. Liked the history of dementors a lot, and I'm guessing we haven't seen the last of them. I will come back for the next updates!
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 28, 2006
    Weird kids are the most interesting kind. :)
    And all that stuff about music of the universe full of Harpers got me all "WHAAAT? What is this useless drivvle?!" But then I had to think logically and be all "Severus doesn't keep useless drivvle in his library."

    Poor Hermione, she's got Severus more interested in sex now. It would be somewhat amusing if Severus started to think about sex more often due to his interactions with Hermione. xDD or become a sex maniac. No wait. We need Hermione to finish her research. :)
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 28, 2006
    Ah Snape you sneaky blighter!! xDD Sending Hermione off the trial of revenge by giving her a book.
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  • From ANON - Purple Velvet on September 28, 2006
    I have to say Ms_Figg that I've been enjoying some of your fics for the past couple of days and might even add that they are some of the best written fic I have found in some time. I would like to thank you for all the hard work put into writing and posting these little babies (Hope you don't mind me calling them babies.) I enjoy the Snape that you have postrait in your fics and most of all I enjoy the slytherin aspect that you bring to Hermione.

    I would like to plea to you to continue this fic because you have brought it to my attention and I most say that I am interested to see how it will go. Only time will tell if Snape will become very much the lover he was in "You Promised It Would Be Forever" (which I might add that the title give me an emotional ball in my throat even before I read it) or if he will be a bastard like in "Inside The Blackest Heart". Although I like very much the 'sappy hapyy ending' Snape, the bastard is still very interesting to read about.

    So again, thank you for your ideas, wonderful fics, and devoted time. It's really really worth while!

    hugs and kisses
    PV
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  • From ANON - luce on September 28, 2006
    For a 'made up theory', it sounds quite plausible. And lovely in a way. We all move to the music of the universe. Yeah, maybe Hermione should have been a bit more precise when it came to the exact wording of the sex bit of the patronage agreement; but then we wouldn't have much of a story to read, would we? We like lemons, and they *can* be bitter, so........ *shrugs* You're building up good, multi-layered characters so far... I reckon anyway. Severus especially. I like your onion analogy, it fits. Like an onion, that devil can make your eyes water! LOL.
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  • From ANON - luce on September 28, 2006
    Well, he was actually kind! A little baby lemon to whet our appetites, eh? Let Hermione's learning begin! On to the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on September 27, 2006
    I wish I could tell all of you that "Oh Severus is so wrong for what he's doing" but that much is obvious. Rape is wrong, but that doesn't mean it doesn't happen, non-consensul sex...happens. I'm not going to attempt to justify what this cold, dark Severus does or input my own morality into it. This is a story, a journey and not a pretty one, and I'm going to tell it the way it comes to me as I always do without any apologies. If it upsets you then I am doing my job with these fictional characters and situations. Please try to remember writing it...is not condoning it OR condemning it. I can just see it happening in my mind's eye, fair or not, nice or not, right or not and just go there, and for the most part trying to figure out why it is happening the way it is. You as the readers have the real reaction, I only provide the circumstances to react to. I'm not about to say I'm sorry or I shouldn't have gone there when life itself goes everywhere including the deepest, darkest most unsavory places. I appreciate my readers, God knows I do...but if a story is just too squicky or morally reprehensible to you, please don't subject yourself to it. I've started this tale and am following it through based on what has preceded it. I will continue to do so. In other words, you can keep dropping bombs on me about it, but I'm still going to write through the fall-out until the piece is completed. How I feel personally however has nothing to do with writing the story and I do my best not to put my values in it, whatever they are or well, I probably wouldn't be able to write. I'd be stumbling over or sidestepping every uncomfortable or unsavory situation. I like to get kneedeep in them. And Marquetta, to address your question "Why can't there be some sort of clause in the patron agreement that lets her keep a modicum of self-respect and power?" I can only answer the question with a question...why did that innocent child get killed by a stray bullet while sitting on the front step playing with her dolls? Why did the wife of a stable, loyal man run off with a no good bum? Why do bad things happen to good people? Why are we cruel to each other? It's because life is not remotely fair. Yes, I am the author and I could play the ideal god and make everything fair and equitable...no hurt, no pain, no conflict...but then there would be no realization or growth in the telling of the tale or the fictional characters. I would never finish the stories. But I do understand how you feel. I just can't do anything about it except let you express your feelings, which is fine with me. This is the first and last time I will address how Severus rapes/and or "takes advantage of" Hermione. I will be raising the shields now, currently operating at 86% power. Thanks for the honest reviews.
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  • From ANON - Dylan on September 27, 2006
    Ch9. Very bad Snape. Even though she agreed with the binding, surely that's rape.
    What a welcome indeed!
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