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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2006
    i love it! Please update
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  • From ANON - angel on September 26, 2006
    ~lol~ that was great i love it ... now he know she will not just sit back and take his crap.... please please please please update soon i would love to read that will happen next ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - luce on September 26, 2006
    ROFL!!! Fabio! And I *was* enjoying a nice cup of hot chocolate too..... you must include a warning next time. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Kris on September 25, 2006
    Sounds pretty gosh darn good! =D Cant wait for more chapters!
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  • From ANON - luce on September 25, 2006
    Tough negotiations there. Well written. Neither budged much, but both got what they wanted, or needed. Even if they don't know it yet! Love the blue hex! Very funny. Raucous is avenged. Can't wait to see how Hermione tries to get back at Severus for it.
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 25, 2006
    Yes, she never should have trusted Snape and it's good to know that she hasn't lost her bargaining talents...although, she might have been a bit more specific re the sex. Oh well, her loss, our gain. LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - DJ on September 25, 2006
    I want a patron. If it's Snape, or Draco, or Lucius. I just love those Slytherin men. Delish!!
    Great chapters - can't wait to see how Hermione passes his tests. We know she will.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 25, 2006
    ~lol~ poor mione .. hmm what is she going to do to get back at him .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - nessie on September 25, 2006
    I love how this is moving. Snape is realy cool. This promises to be a great story.

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  • From ANON - catseye on September 25, 2006
    wow! this story has me hooked...like allmost all your other stories. I wonder if Miss Granger
    is innocent or if she has lost her virginal status somewhere along the past few years.
    I guess it will have been problematic for her to keep a healthy relationship with somebody, when there is always Harrys wellbeing to be thought of by her. You know, your website is the first to be opened by me, when I go online. God I'm like a junky...hooked on your stories. ;)
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  • From ANON - angel on September 25, 2006
    man .. snape is getting what he wnat her out of the private sector... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - luce on September 25, 2006
    Brilliant! Hermione is lucky he didn't hex her into the next world for speaking to him so.... truthfully. And he laid it on the line for her. She hates house elf servitude, but she is entering into a kind of servitude for Harry's sake. Sad she has to give up her independance though. This was a great chapter.
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  • From ANON - luce on September 25, 2006
    LOL! Raucous seems a lot like my cat, Havelock. I love him! (Raucous, and Havelock of course) Rude, crude and unattractive. The ideal familiar for Severus. Let's see how he recovers from his stunning by mean ol' Hermione. And how will Severus wriggle out of the fact he 'owes' Harry Potter? Well writ, now on to the next chapter I go...
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  • From ANON - luce on September 24, 2006
    Poor Harry. What a way to live. LOL at Severus being a violinist. But yeah, why not? Nice surprise, maybe one day he'll play on... ooops, play *for*, Hermione ;-)
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  • From ANON - Cara on September 24, 2006
    Wow. I've read alot of your H/S stories [my favourite] and they've all been erotically awesome. But Snape seems to be at his meanest in this one. Lol poor Hermione. It'll be interesting to see how they warm up, if they do.
    Please continue with this story. I think it has a great plot with potential. =)
    -Cara [a fan]
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