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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Kris on September 24, 2006
    Hmmm, Cant wait to see this meeting. Hahahaha
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 24, 2006
    Ch 4 - You may be on to something with the violin. Snape kinda reminds me of Sherlock Holmes in looks and his antisocial behaviour. Waiting eagerly for another chapter.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 24, 2006
    wow that was great .. i hope she can find a why to save harry.. i hope snape will help her .... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - annie on September 24, 2006
    OH! this is a great story!! i do hope you will continue to write this!! i loooove long stories and as you said it looks to be one!! although if it puts a tax on your time then it is quite understandable but i do hope you change your mind and write a great long piece! you're the best author here!! i love your stories!! please continue writing this one!!!
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  • From ANON - luce on September 24, 2006
    Well done Draco! What a cranky old ferta Severus is. But that's why we love him. Can't wait for the meeting...
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 23, 2006
    Ch 3 - Yes, you've definitely made Draco very appealing. Snape is a hoot as usual. Her patron? What's a little sex afterall? LOL This should be an interesting meeting. I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - jamie on September 23, 2006
    wow I really like this severus!
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 23, 2006
    Ch 1 & 2 - You've made Draco quite the man...a little naughty and a little nice. Very attractive.
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  • From ANON - DragonKisser on September 23, 2006
    This is going to be good . . . I can taste it. Mean and unforgiving . . . just how I like my potions masters. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on September 23, 2006
    JB: I often reuse my original characters in alternate universe stories just as I put Severus and Hermione in different situations with different histories. They retain their core charateristics but there are other changes in their circumstances. For example, Marcus is always a womanizer and troublemaker, Adam is always flamboyant and with Victor and Andreas is always wise and resourceful.
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  • From ANON - JB on September 23, 2006
    Oh wow! I kept coming back and there is was- a new chapter. Not that you did it for me personally, but still, thank you. I am confused. Is this Andreas Mbutu supposed to be the same character in the Daddy Dearest story or are you just re-using a name that you liked?
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  • From ANON - JB on September 23, 2006
    Of course you are going to continue this story and will be at least 40 chapters long of wonderful plot, chracterizations, filled with just the right amount of angst,action,a hint of humor, and a few lemons. YOu goth all that! Now get to it.Your loyal readers are impatinetly tapping their feet ( ok just the refresh button hoping to see more chapters appear.)Terrific start. Loved your ideas about the beginning of the Dementors. How original. Please do continue this story.
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  • From ANON - luce on September 23, 2006
    Now I'm interested to see how Draco develops along with the rest of the story. Don't make him too wussy now, please? He has to be strong to take on our Severus. Ooooh, now I'm telling you how to write. I'll just shut up now and leave you too it, shall I? 'Coz you do it best.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on September 22, 2006
    Great start!!! I can't wait to see your dark Sev.
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  • From ANON - Kris on September 22, 2006
    Hahahahhaha I would like to see where this is gonna go!
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