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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Kris on October 24, 2006
    Got all pissed off 3/4 of the way done because I knew it was going to be a horrible cliffe... but now that im done with the chapter I guess im content to wait another day for the next one... *sniffsniffsobsob* =D
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  • From ANON - penne on October 24, 2006
    Come on ... you left it there?! How long will I have to wonder if Severus will feel able to move forward with Hermione? This is spellbinding. I wish there was a genre listing at this site - so I could know that Severus and Hermione will have a happy ending. Excellent writing!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 24, 2006
    man poor sev i hope this dose show him that he does love her ....please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 24, 2006
    Chapter 63!

    I am on the edge of my seat now! OMG! THis is awesome! I can not believe Severus is doing it liek this. So beautiful and dark, he would use the dark to find love and light!

    Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 24, 2006
    Chapter 62!

    I think it is so awesome that Severus opened up to Hermione. That is so going to help thier relationship so much. UGH! His life was so sad, it made me get all gloomy, those damn annoying Gryffindors. But I do love Remus, sad that Seveus could never stand him. But oh well.

    Awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 24, 2006
    Poor Severus is getting desperate. I agree though going through all that to find proof is really proof itself. I can see to though why he needs more. I think it's very romantic but kinda foolish which love does have a way of making people do foolish things.Ido hope things turn out ok. It will be intersting to see how it tunrs out. and lol Lemons are good anytime as long as it involves Severus. Love it. more please. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - isabel on October 24, 2006
    this is one of the best hermione x severus stories i have ever read your such a talented writer have you ever thought of actually writing something based on your own idea's? it'd probably be good enough to sell

    xox bel
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 24, 2006
    Sweetmeatsaphobe?! xD Yes, he does seem to be that.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 24, 2006
    Go Hermione!
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 24, 2006
    The moment I read the "sort of" I knew who the photographer was! XD
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  • From ANON - angel on October 24, 2006
    ~lol~ i love it .... and the he told mione he said not to the shoot and why ... i hope he dose take the next step .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more

    angel
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 24, 2006
    very nice and tender beginning, and i was seriously rofl at the end hehe keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Jan on October 23, 2006
    OMG! I mean WOW; Love it, love this story can't wait for the next chapter.
    I really do hope that Sev. does the pose for Playwitch, that would really be interesting.^_^
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON..........................................................................
    ......................................................................................
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  • From ANON - Grim on October 23, 2006
    Absolutly Fabulous...I love how much detail you insert into it.
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 23, 2006
    Ch 59-61 Oh my dear! Viktor and Adam! Love that pair. Poor Severus and naughty you! You never did tell us whether he accepted. Hmmmm,will he give in? Can't wait to see.
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