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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg

From ANON - takemeaway on October 23, 2006
wow, very good. ADAM!!!! YAY!!!! I am so glad you brought him in! I LOVE him. He is undoubtedly my favorite of your ocs LMAO @ severus going to the interview and awwww @ him telling hermione his story
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From ANON - Kris on October 23, 2006
Damn, I hate cliffes. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MORE MORE MORE!!! =D
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From ANON - tatiana on October 23, 2006
More ... please, they're just opening up to each other!
Excellent fic, such originality of plot amid the ... romance.
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From ANON - Cara on October 23, 2006
Well I would feel the same way as Hermione. You can't have a relationship based purely on sex, with one person loving and the other not.

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From ANON - Chavela on October 23, 2006
Chapter 61!

Wow! Wife, children! What is that going to do to Severus!? LOL!

Great chapter!
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From ANON - Chavela on October 23, 2006
Chapter 60!

Awesome to see Adam and Viktor! I love them!
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From ANON - Chavela on October 23, 2006
Chapter 59!

Well I am very glad that they touched upon their relationship. But I do have to admit, that I am not sure if someone said the VERy wrong thing to me after I had asked a serious question...if them fucking me would get rid of my anger. And that damn fast. No...

I have never frowned while reading something of yours... that part though, just was not right. I am young, but not so young that I would ever in a million years let someone keep at it, if they had literally just pissed me off while on top of me. No, not cool.

But the rest of the chapter was very very very good! Loved it, just not that part.
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From ANON - angel on October 23, 2006
wow .. in glad he is telling her about his past .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please upadate soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - yanna on October 23, 2006
A masterpiece.
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From ANON - lisa on October 23, 2006
Yes indeed Severus seems to be growing. and I guess Hermione is old fashioned due to her muggle heritage. I'd never turn n Severus down lol. but It's great she is being true to herself and has told him her intentions and feelings. It almost seems she is trying to goad him to make a decison but not really. Severus can't ault her for being honest and having morals. I just hope things tiurn out ok. It would be sad for them to part. it seems ti might be leading up to some conflict soon though. I just can't wait to see what happens. more please. Update soon please. I love this story and this Severus is awesome. He's my most favorite and seems the closest to canon than i have seen in a while. kudos.
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From ANON - elektik_storm on October 23, 2006
more soon! yay!
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From ANON - Sampdoria on October 23, 2006
I love your story, and that you don't make us wait forever for updates. I'm usually careful about reading such long stories that ain't complete, not knowing if the author will finish the story or not, but with your progress (and your fantastic plot), I look forward to each new chapter.
Just one thing, I sure hope you don't let Severus beeing pictured in "Playwitch", the Hermionie living in my mind would never forgive such betrayal to the relationship. I hate it when authors make this (all in my mind) smart, courages, wonderful woman, and make her out to be some shivering "nutbrain" more suitable for a Barbara Cartland story than a HP-fanfiction.
Keep up the good work:-)
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From ANON - amaria on October 23, 2006
OMG!!!I love this fic,its just so good!!I also love the way that you update on a regular basis.I hate it when your half way through a fic and then all off a sudden there isnt an update for months or even (shock horror)never again!
*cries from the memory of so many unfinished fics,looks around guiltily,quickly recovers pretending shes fine*
*sniff*
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From ANON - BrianDarksoul on October 23, 2006
Ohhhh That photographer had best watch his well meaning comments. Hopefully his Deathpartner can soothe Severus's ire right now so his 'Queen' won't do something that will drastically shorten his unlife.
Severus is VERY touchy about his appearance even for a straight guy. Impressive new chapters though!
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From ANON - angel on October 23, 2006
man .. adam is somthign els .. i think mione will get a few laughs out of it when sev tell her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
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