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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - lisa on October 23, 2006
    lol omg those chappies were great. and the last was so funny. Well they finally have a workable,in-trasiton deal but I see Severus concessing more so deep down he loves Hermione. hmm maybe something needs to happen to shake him up beore he'll tell Hermione he loves her too. lol he's so Slytherin and devious and delicious. Love the story.more please. Update soon. lo I cannot believe Severus held his wand from Adam asking him about his length. And I cannot wait to see Severus decision and how Hermione reacts. Update soon again. thanks.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on October 23, 2006
    Oh god, my favorite supporting character is back!!!! Yay Sweetmeats!!!! I always enjoy your work.
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  • From ANON - Bonnie on October 23, 2006
    OH Goodness, Adam and Victor ride again!

    I so enjoy finding your updates. Send the kids to school and settle in with my morning coffee to see what your pair is doing today!

    THANK YOU!

    P.W.
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  • From ANON - mekareami on October 23, 2006
    I have enjoyed the story so far and look forward to more :) Glad to see AFF is back online for new postings
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 23, 2006

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  • From ANON - angel on October 23, 2006
    im glad the are going to try and work things out ..... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 23, 2006
    Hermione's arguement for him would be "Well If you're posing for Playwitch, I guess I can pose for Playwizard. As you say, it can be quite lucrative!" :D
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on October 23, 2006
    Looks like, Brenda Fitzworten knows what she wants and how to get it! :)
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  • From ANON - CB13 on October 22, 2006
    Ms_Figg, so sneaky! I look forward to this tale's resolution. Thank you for writing so well; I read earlier in the reviews how you don't use a beta. Sweetie, unlike so many writers (myself included), you don't really need one. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on October 22, 2006
    Chapter 58!

    *melts*
    Severus looked at Hermione
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on October 22, 2006
    nice update, loving the citrus
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 22, 2006
    i think they should have worked things out first, then fucked, but the sequence doesn't really matter.
    the interview will be interesting....i wonder if that brenda will try and make a move on him.
    and will hermione spy on him during the interview?
    because i would love to see her reaction to the questions i think brenda will ask. yuh anyway. short but sweet chapter.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 22, 2006
    wow that was great .. now that mione got ther awnser about sev and his duel with harry out of the way the can spend time together.. hmm will mione find out about sev's meeting ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 22, 2006
    I saw that stopping there, dont know why, just did. XD MORE MORE MORESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS PLZNTHANKYOUS!
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 22, 2006
    omg lol yay finally. if only to be in Hermione's place. Well at least he gave her a few moments to ask her questions before he pounced lol. again if only to be in her place. Severus is quite delicious. more please. Good chappie. Please update soon.
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