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Reviews for Practice Makes Perfect

By : CiraArana
  • From RAW19 on April 08, 2015
    That was quite sexy, at times funny, fairly in character, and certainly enjoyable.

    Most Excellent.
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  • From ANON - the_scribbler on December 17, 2013
    FUN STORY! I really, really enjoyed reading this and I think you did a great job capturing Hermione's character and Harry's natural hesitation. I also thought that you did a great job with the !smut! It's never, ever easy to write a good and convincing scene and I think you succeeded. Looking forward to seeing more from you!

    Regards,

    the_scribbler
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  • From Distantskyking on August 06, 2007
    OH YES! Practice does make perfect and now I have a perfectly sore right wrist *chuckles*

    This fic? ABSOLUTELY great.
    Good writing job.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 25, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Roedhunt on March 16, 2007
    Wow! I was rec'd here by phoenixwriter and I am sure glad I came! (no pun intended *g*) I have read many smut stories over the years and so many of them are so clich
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  • From on January 30, 2007
    This story...one word to describe it...

    Perfect!

    You took what Rowling wrote and brought it to the next step, with all of the innocence and unpredictability of teenagers. It felt like a missing chapter from HBP, if that was the angle you were aiming for...coupled with the possessive attitude Harry had in it. I look forward to what you do with DH after it comes out.
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  • From ANON - Aysha on November 26, 2006
    Hallo CiraArana!

    Super story! Ich kenn ja nicht mal die Harry Potter B
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  • From ANON - HarrtandHermi on October 31, 2006
    Wonderful story. Left me wondering at the end though. I was hoping it would end more towards Harry and hermione both recognize their love for one another. I hope you wite a sequel like that. Not sure whether you might though just hope u do. Please if its no bother mail me at harryandhermi@yahoo.com if you add future chapters or write another hhr story. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - wannabeawizard on October 30, 2006
    fantastic story but it is still somewhat ambiguous as who hermione decides to end up with as i'm damn anxious and need complete confirmation to do with any sort of hhr.

    absolutely brilliant but please say harry and hermione get together after that, not just some secret that harry took ron's future gf's cherry. :( i hate rhr!!! yukky!
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  • From ANON - MaryJane on October 26, 2006
    This was a great story and would be a perfect story for a second chapter. I mean those two belong together and for more than just practice. Great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2006
    very nice you could make a sequel
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  • From ANON - Kasey22 on October 09, 2006
    Excellent job! Great characterization, great plotline, great everything. Really well done.
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  • From ANON - Janey on October 03, 2006
    That was so hot! Please, please, please write some more of it!!!
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  • From ANON - Malinda on October 01, 2006
    Will this only be a one-shot, or are you going to make it into a longer story? I would LOVE to read some more chapters...please...I just felt as though the ending left me hanging a bit; I mean, are they together? Are they still 'just friends'? Please continue and let us know.
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  • From ANON - morgan on September 30, 2006
    oh god i loved this story.
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