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Reviews for Shifting the Balance

By : darkyasmin
  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on December 02, 2006
    Oh man! I hadn't seen the updates on this one lately, so when I found it, I had three chapters to read! Very nice!!! I love this story and am really looking forward to when the two of them give in to their desires! I know they want to! Please update soon!!!

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 02, 2006
    Ohhh an update yay!!!!! Lol I want to throw my puter out too sometimes. and I saw the story Water and marked it but havent read it yet. going to though. Awesome chappies. I am so glad you updated. I can see them slowly starting to gravitate towards each other. He's soooo yummy even when he's being a bastard. I cant wait ofr more. more more more please. Update soon Please.
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  • From ANON - MsChelle on November 15, 2006
    Oh please, oh please, oh please, oh please post the next chapter before I loose my mind!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - allison on November 12, 2006
    that was amazingly hot.
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  • From ANON - iluv2dance on November 12, 2006
    OMFG!! So hot and awesome!! Please update really soon!!! Fucking awesome!
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  • From ANON - prinlita on November 11, 2006
    Your fic is so good. I just finished the most recent chapter, and the awkward ending between the two as they go further. Please update soon, and keep up the good writing. Love your fic!!!
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  • From ANON - JAIDEN on November 10, 2006
    oh this was great...plz add more
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  • From ANON - rachel on November 10, 2006
    great buildup, i cant wait to see what happens next...
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on November 09, 2006
    hey i really like this story alot and i hope that u update real soon . i wanna knnow what happenns well ttyl
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  • From ANON - allie on November 09, 2006
    Please update!
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  • From ANON - yang on November 09, 2006
    man! it was awesome!! i loved ever second of it!
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  • From ShilohDarke on November 09, 2006
    I love your story idea! It is really good. Man! Makes ya want more! Like... soon! Please update. I enjoyed it very much. just one question... Have you considered getting a Beta to help you with getting the paragraphs just so? It gets a little hard to follow when the sentence breaks onto anotehr paragraph in the middle of a word.

    PLEASE don't take offense! I love your story.I want to see it become even better! You're doing great and a beta would just help to make it that much stronger.

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - GuardGeek on November 09, 2006
    That was definitely one of the HOTTEST lemon scenes EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love how reluctant she was and how new it was for her, that was AMAZING. GREAT JOB can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 09, 2006
    Well that was awkward but lol at least she got something out of Draco. wow lol quite um saucy there. more please. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - MsChelle on November 09, 2006
    Yes! Yes! Yes! Finally. That was so good. I need more. Please give me more!
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