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Reviews for Shifting the Balance

By : darkyasmin
  • From ANON - Avanell on November 09, 2006
    Oh, I SOOO hope he's fighting his feelings inside...can't we have a peak? In his head, I mean. But more of their, er, actions together! And I don't mean fighting.
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  • From KatDiva on November 07, 2006
    Best line of the chapter: Little Red was clinging onto Potter as if he was oxygen itself.

    You're doing a great job!

    Thanks!
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  • From KatDiva on November 07, 2006
    I wanted to check out your story b/c I enjoy DM/HG stories!

    I like the tension you create between Malfoy and Hermione. The story starts off with a bang right away!

    If I could offer some constructive criticism it would be this: There seems to be an awful lot of yelling and commotion in the library. First with Draco and Hermione, and then with Lenn attacking Hermione. Where is Madam Pince? On vacation? LOL

    That aside, you put some GREAT descriptive passages in there! "His blue eyes frosted over" ohhhh I love that!

    "Looking like a hippogriff has just had its way with you." Another AWESOME line!

    Keep it up!
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  • From ShilohDarke on November 06, 2006
    ARGH!!!!! That just drives me to insanity! Unresolved Sexual Tension much? I mean, MY GOD!!! Talk about getting all worked up and then dropped like a hot potato! Those two are going to set Hogwarts on fire by the time they finally get together!

    PLEASE Update soon! You are killing me!

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - TiffANY on November 06, 2006
    I LIKE IT, I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT!

    PLEASE CONTINUE
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 06, 2006
    Wow. Hermione keeps pushing. not smart. and Malfoy he's something else. He's still mean and nasty but lol god he is so sexy. Can't wait to see the next chappie. good chappie more more more please. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - natyslacks on November 06, 2006
    Well I usually don
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  • From ANON - angel dust on November 05, 2006
    Please update soon. I love it!!!
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  • From ANON - iluv2dance on November 04, 2006
    OMFG!!! So fucking good!! Can't wait for more!! Yaaay!!! They got together and it was awesome!!! Very heated!! Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Jaiden on November 04, 2006
    awesome chapter number 7!!! it was great from start to finish. A couple of mispelled words but besides that awesome! loved it please right more
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  • From ANON - prinlita on November 03, 2006
    I love your fic soooo much!!! I just read the newest chapter, and I loved it. This is my favorite herm/draco fic. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shardae on November 03, 2006
    Why did he leave like that?? Add soon....
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  • From ANON - MsChelle on November 03, 2006
    SSSSSSOOOOOOOOO hot.....I need more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 03, 2006
    Woah I loved this chapter, very intense in all kinds of ways =)
    Can't wait fore more of this!
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 02, 2006
    Wow. Hermione got a little of the violence she thought him capable of doing but it surely surprised her. and thats what happens when you push too far. She is lucky that's all he did. Draco is still delicious even whne he's a big prat. and uggg that last part was really hot. I guess fighting brings out their passion. lo. more more more please. Update soon please.
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