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Reviews for Shifting the Balance

By : darkyasmin
  • From ANON - Jaiden on October 27, 2006
    this was great from all I read so far
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  • From ANON - Britt on October 26, 2006
    LOVE IT. update!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on October 26, 2006
    So much for Ron being jealous, I do hope that things pick up (again) with Malfoy and Hermione ;)
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  • From ANON - TiffANY on October 13, 2006
    What an AMAZING chapter!

    Draco is so mean!

    PLEASE continue I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - TiffANY on October 12, 2006
    GREAT chapter, please continue!
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  • From ANON - hermione24 on October 11, 2006
    Love it! I just want to read more.
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  • From ANON - DragonsLore on October 11, 2006
    Hey great story so far, I'm looking foreward to your next update, so far you are doing a wonderful job keeping everyone in character, I just hope it stays that way for a while. Keep it up, and I'll be watching for your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - sleep is for the weak on October 06, 2006
    Hi! i just wanted to say that I really like how you started this story. It'd be nice if you update soon...just a thought ;)
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on September 28, 2006
    ok your story idea is a good one and I do like it, but I think you need to consult a beta before you post another chapter. Grabble is not a Harry Potter character, and your spelling and grammer leaves alot to be desired. It is difficult to read a story that isn't spaced out properly, or where you cannot tell when points of view end and start or when sentences start and finish. Once you get that fixed I think you will have a fabulous story.

    Good Luck!
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  • From ANON - skydancer on September 28, 2006
    Great start. Nice save of Draco's ego/attitude there.... Now, I'm not going to comment on the couple of misspelt words (*cough*fuzzy not *cough* fussy) But I think that Head's are 7th years? It sounds like they are 5th or maybe 6th year? anyhoo.... great start, great clashing of personalities, and I am looking forward to reading the rest!
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  • From ANON - <3 on September 28, 2006
    i love it already! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lexy Malfoy on September 28, 2006
    awesome first 2 chapters. I'm looking forward to your next update.
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