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By : devilfancy
  • From ANON - Rousy_P on September 02, 2010
    I just had to come back and read it again, because it's a wonderful fic and it always cheers me up :D You really did a good job!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 22, 2009
    That was the most HILARIOUS story I've ever read! Seriously! :-)

    And it's sad because I haven't read a humorous H/D story in a LONG
    time as of now. Yes, there are good stories, but NONE of them have
    the sense of humor you've written here.

    Very sad.

    I wish you'd come back and show them how it's done.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on March 26, 2009
    ROFLMAO!*claps loudly and stands up* BRAVO DARLING! that was by far one of the funniest damn things that i have ever read and i have read A LOT! is there anyways i can talk you into letting me copy this, just on to my desk top so i can read it anytime i have a bad day? i swear that i will NEVER EVER give it to anyone else or try to pass it off as my own. please? you can send a reply to my email so i know.


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  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on November 04, 2008
    Sweet and Funny
    Great Work!
    =^-^=
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  • From Ginevrasn on July 07, 2008
    Oh dear Gods! That is the funniest Harry Potter story I have every read.

    I'm going to be giggling for days...
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  • From LeeB on July 07, 2008
    That was fun from beginning to end.
    I love the entire thing, and the sex was hot. Thank you for giving me lots to think about.

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  • From ladydeathfaerie on July 07, 2008
    oh, holy gods! this was fucking hilarious! and i mean
    fucking hilarious. i laughed so much... i LOVED it!!!!

    thanks for the brilliant piece of crack.

    fucking great!

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - onyx on July 06, 2008
    OMG!
    Totally wonderful! You did an absolutely fantastic job writing this!
    All very well done especially the humor ROFL!!!!
    My favorite part was: "I can't believe you licked my lizard!!"
    Still chuckling and laughing

    Best Regards,
    onyx
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  • From ANON - Sue on November 02, 2007
    I love it! Amazing!
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  • From MisstressNicole on October 22, 2007
    I just read the first paragraph or was it a sentence? I'm not sure I'm confused. Punctuation is your friend, use it wisely. You're story lacks basic structure and while it may have a good plot, many will never know. Why, you ask? How many people are there really willing to read a story where the first paragraph is structured like a poorly written sentence?

    On another note, not every sentence needs to be on its own line. If you are going to capitalize something to suggest shouting you don't need nor should you use exclamation marks. Another mistake most people make: "HARRY!!!!" Ron shouted. (Not one of your sentences, just an example.) Capitalization indicates shouting as does the over usage of exclamation points, so it's not needed for you to tell us that it was shouted.

    All in all, you should rewrite it or get a beta. It'll help improve your writing.

    Nicole
    MisstressNicole@hotmail.com

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  • From Draeconin on May 20, 2007
    Abso-frigging-lutely fabulously funny!
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  • From misslala on May 18, 2007
    haha this was too cute! :) Thanks for sharing
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  • From PotionsMistress1 on May 18, 2007
    An absolutely wonderful and delightful tale! Thoughtfully written, thoroughly witty, and with just enough hilarity to keep one reading until the end!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2007
    omg omg omg haha i dont think i stopped laughing the whole time. Knibs is sooooo cute omg lol. I love you, your fucking awesome :)
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  • From on March 31, 2007
    Oh my god..that..was..genius..e__e
    You are one of my favorite authors on this site, and for a total bookworm/Granger like me, that's saying something.
    You. Are. Amazing. o.o

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