Click Here!

Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

By : Mizzfreestyle
  • From JustDucky on July 25, 2007
    It seems though that Snape has grown a . . . maybe fondness for Harry? That's how it seems to me. :D I hope so, at least (if not falling in love with him), because . . . I know it's only a fanfic, but I just don't like it much when in Snarry fanfics that Severus forces Harry into something. I'll still read them if it's good writing (and I like the story, bwah), it's just not my favorite plot. :)

    But yes, you must simply continue sooner rather than later. :) It's still a grand story.

    ~*MsCashew
    Report Review

  • From OutlawAngel on July 22, 2007
    I NEED MORE!!!
    Report Review

  • From tippi on July 20, 2007
    This last chapter (18) disappointed me, I was hoping that Snape did have feelings for Harry. Now I
    Report Review

  • From Jan on July 19, 2007
    Please Update soon ^_^
    Report Review

  • From LordThingy69 on July 19, 2007
    OH MY GOOBLY GOO!

    slaps Harry with slimy noodle! What? OOOH! I hope you make Snape get back at Harry bigtime! no easy forgiveness make him REAAALLLY work hard at getting Snape back. *slaps Harry with heavier slimy noodle*

    Awesome chapter. Very clever.
    I can't wait as usual for the next one!! Whoot! JUST ONE MORE TORTUROUS DAY FOR DEATHLY HALLOWS!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!
    Report Review

  • From NoxisTorche on July 16, 2007
    Oh my... Oh No! Poor poor beloved Snape. He's so heartbroken.

    ^.^ Wonderful work of prose! Keep up the good work! Five out of Five Golden Stars for You!
    Just make sure that poor Snape gets some love. Its so depressing seeing him pine and then deny himself the one thing he wants more than anything else. >.>
    Report Review

  • From Greentreefrog510 on July 16, 2007
    i love this so far! i can't wait for the next chapter!
    Report Review

  • From chantalmalfoy on July 16, 2007
    NO!!! *SMACKS HARRY* What in the world do you think you are doing, boy?!?!?

    I do hope that next chapter comes quickly because I can't handle not knowing what fickle little Harry will do to mess things up even more...
    Report Review

  • From JustDucky on July 16, 2007
    Oh mah goodness! Harry can't sign! You're torturing me leaving it there! *sob, pout*

    Anyhoo, oh God, you need to finish the story. I started reading it just yesterday, and I love every bit of it.
    Report Review

  • From Bookworm51485 on July 16, 2007
    DAMN IT MAN!!! The stupid friggin Daily Moment of Downtime ate my damn review. I'm so pissed. I can't even remember most of what I said, but I'll try to recall some of it:

    Harry's either crazy or a dumbass but either way he's frustrating the hell out of me. Snape's given him so many chances and he just won't bite. This is someone you love, do you want to lose him forever. It almost feels like Snape should just give up on him, except Snape loves him so it would make him miserable too. Maybe he needs someone to seriously talk some sense into him, someone like Sirius maybe. Someone who he'll take seriously, because he's obviously not listening to Hermione, Ron, or the twins. I swear it's driving me nuts. I can't imagine that someone could be so stupid without there being something maybe screwing with his head. Maybe that's what it is, something (someone) is screwing with his head. Either that or again, he's a dumbass.
    Report Review

  • From Jan on July 16, 2007
    OMG! Harry is getting on my every nerves. ARGH! He better not sign that contract.
    Please update soon
    Report Review

  • From una on July 15, 2007
    I really love this story. I followed it from the very first chapter and this is why I feel the need to criticize the 4 (or so) last chapters. Harry's behavior and his continual refusal to marry Snape seem unnecessary, silly and childish. I know that you want to add some drama but it is very hard to understand and to sympathies with him since there is no real logic or a plausible explanation to his behavior. Moreover, it completely contradicts his previews behavior and the progress in his and Snape's relationship. He is portrayed as a pig- headed little boy who only runs away from his problem instead of facing them. Gryffindors suppose to be the brave ones. Why can't he just talk to Snape? The so called problem with the Dark Lord finding out can be resolved rather easily. It is getting more and more difficult to understand him and to like his character. I will say it again- I really love your story and that is why it is important for me to write this review (which I usually don't do).
    Report Review

  • From brownbetty27 on July 15, 2007
    Harry isn't the one being an idiot though. Everyone who is trying to force and rush him into marriage are idiots. This is just a bit too over the top.
    Report Review

  • From anniea on July 15, 2007
    WHAT THE HELL IS HARRY DOING *in howler mode* *in softer howler mode* great lenght of the chapter though. update SOON emphasing the keyword here is once again SOON *kisses*
    Report Review

  • From KuramaLover000 on July 14, 2007
    OMFG -harry just fucking got on my nerves in this chapter-i mean come on he loves snape and yet he is going to take the easy way out because its to hard. well cry me a river and tell him to get over himself and tell the damn man how he feels-any way i still like the story and i hope u up date soon.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!