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Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

By : Mizzfreestyle
  • From tigra9969 on June 21, 2007
    Okay, now that's just cruel leaving off at the end like that......I really like you story and can't wait for your next update.
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  • From zuerlein2001 on June 20, 2007
    can't wait to see more.
    K.
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  • From chantalmalfoy on June 19, 2007
    Realistic... Idealistic... who cares as long as it's HOT?!?!!! lol...

    Thanks for the update. I hope it isn't too awfully long before the next one... I'm really enjoying this fic. :)
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  • From Selera on June 19, 2007
    Great chapter.. I had forgotten about this story.. anywyas.. for sex scene. Hell I like dark and dirty.. so realistic.. combined with idealistic in a way.
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  • From pinklemonade5678 on June 19, 2007
    WOW GREAT STORY!!! .. it took you quite sometime to update but i'm really glad you did, i thought you have abandoned it and i've been looking forward to it really and it's a shame it'll take you longer to update next time but i guess art cnt be rushed right ^_~
    as for the preference hmm, I've always prefered something sweet and fluffy but not too OOC that gives you tooth aches ^^.
    OH! just a suggestion but i'm not really sure if it, good so please feel free to ignore it if you don't like it... why not make Harry Suffer a little like before he could tell Snape that he was wrong make Sevy say that he too wanted to talk to Harry about an annulment ^^, Harry will ba all broken hearted, Draco wanting to help tries to comfort harry and Albus being the medlesome old coot that he is distorts the friendship into something romantic in Sevy's eyes, making the potion's master jealous, then he becomes all possesive and aggressive that he literaly sweeps Harry of his feet and shows Harry Who he really belongs to... *thinks* geez i never thought i could be so cheesy... anyway ^^
    BEST WISHES!!!! hope you create more fics as great such as this or even greater ^^
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  • From Bookworm51485 on June 18, 2007
    Personally, I prefer it to be more realistic. But I don't like those that go on forever and ever in complete graphic detail. There's a point where you just want it to end. Personally I don't think a ton of detail is necessary to make a really hot sex scene. The one that always gets me (and I've read it MANY time now) is maybe a page or so long and it really doesn't go into extreme detail but it's really... good :D But if I had to choose between long and realistically graphic and peachy and perfect, I think I'd choose long and realistically graphic.

    As for this chapter, all I have to say is 'Stupid Harry' *smacks him upside the head really hard*. I hope Severus will forgive the dumb teenage. It's stupid to have gone about it the way he did instead of just telling him the truth. What did he think the truth would hurt? "I'm scared that our relationship might cause you harm in the future, so I want to take a break." That's all it would take and it would have gone across a lot better than that crap Harry told Severus. Again 'Stupid Harry'.
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  • From Kalico on June 11, 2007
    This story is oddly fascinating. It has the right ounces of creativity and an interesting writing style that has ensnared my heart. The characters are OOC somewhat and it annoyed me a bit when i began to read but now i just love what you have done. This story has so much potential and you are doing great justice to it i must say. It has become one of my favorites and one of the best HP fics i've read yet although I will admit that I have only recently just started reading Harry potter fics courtesy of a persistent friend of mine. i seriously thought that such fics were not worth my time because I could not fathom any of the "live-action" characters together. But i find that i am fascinated with the Harry Potter world and I love the new adventures and situations you create. You are an inspiration. Anyway please update soon. l8r.


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  • From oogies4u on June 10, 2007
    This is really making me sad .. hope you make it better

    DragZ
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  • From IshtarTenshi on June 07, 2007
    PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!!! WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN TO SEV!? AHHHH! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! I'M DOWN ON BENDED KNEES!
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  • From dmnchld13 on June 07, 2007
    Heartbreaking. More, please. ::MV::
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  • From chantalmalfoy on May 31, 2007
    Wow... just found this fic. ANd I am very caught up in it now. I want to smack Harry on the head for being such a brat! Poor Severus...

    Oh, and why did Malfoy's attacks hit Harry if he was wearing his ring? Isn't the ring supposed to gaurd him against attacks?...
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  • From anniea on May 29, 2007
    hurry up people and save me from my insanity by reviewing, this story is too cute, slightly off b/c ithought that that engagement ring was to ward off attacks? oh i hope sev will be alright. update soon. *kisses*
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  • From bluemoongurl628 on May 27, 2007
    OMG you have to update soon. that last part was a real cliff hanger, it's really sad too. I love your story and i'm more then anxious to read more please please please update soon.
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  • From LordThingy69 on May 24, 2007
    OMG!! UPDATE NOW!!! I'm totally dying!! How can you leave a cliffie like that!?? My head is gonna explode!! Dang you Harry! (even though I enjoy Harry giving Severus a hard time like that...) I hope Sevvie is able to get through this with minimal injury...physical that is...emotional well...that can be heavy since Harry intends on telling him that they are splitsville when he returns.

    Then Harry will probably be the one in emotional turmoil, and Hermione will probably slap him into oblivion a few times. So I guess that evens out.

    Good job though. Especially since this story is so emotionally charged.

    Thanks for updating! Whoot!
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  • From Lathea on May 23, 2007
    A LITTLE prat?! He's the biggest prat in the world! Poor Severus! And what is it he wanted to ask Harry? Omg, I feel so sorry for Snape. Damn Harry! GAHD!
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