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Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

By : Mizzfreestyle
  • From lkm40 on May 23, 2007
    Harry needs to be drawn and quartered...or spanked...or whipped..definitely punished in a very harsh manner for what he's done to Severus. What an idiot. I'm so angry at him that a part of me doesn't want to read anymore, yet if I don't, I'll never know how it ends. You are a cruel woman and I hope that you update really soon so that I don't have to be kept waiting.

    Keep up the great work.
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  • From soloflamelady on May 22, 2007
    I have followed this story from the beginning I would love to read more so please update soon
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  • From Daemonenbraut on May 21, 2007
    I love this story! Shit Harry why have you done this??? hope sev will return in save. please update soon
    lg daemonenbraut
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  • From dropedonmyhead on May 20, 2007
    Okay, I often read a bunch of stories and then review this was the last I read today and I liked it. Very much. Well done, but....

    Could you please fix chapter 14 the spacing and paragraphs are off they all run together, makes for hard reading on that bit, but other then that and a few minor bits, VERY well done!
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  • From LordThingy69 on May 07, 2007
    Hey!! Don't abandon this story!! PLEASE! Update, update, update!! This story is awesome and you have to finish it at least. It's just wrong to leave it like this.

    Please, if you can find some time to please either add another chapter or make the final chapter if you feel you can't continue to update the story regularly. I beg of you please don't leave this story as is. It deserves an ending.

    Thanks
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  • From Facecat on March 29, 2007
    "I would never cease to think about inflicting harm upon you.
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  • From Lokemele on March 22, 2007
    Good Story so Far.
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  • From Jicky on March 20, 2007
    finally finished reading all 14 chapters. i can't wait to see how Harry will go bout putting off Sev, and how Sev will deal with it.
    mainly i find how Harry kinda suddenly just becoming in love with Sev a bit strange. i know feelings develop'd but still a tad not quite smooth.
    fairly interesting and good read so far, thumbs up~
    looking forward to the next chapter. and i love long chapters like these.
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  • From LordThingy69 on March 17, 2007
    I Love You for such a long chapter!!!! and updating!!! Whoot! *dances insanely in a circle* I love it, I still am amazed that such a phenomenally fantastic story comes from someone so young as yourself. Wow!

    I sorta like the idea of Voldy having a crush or lusting after Severus. Sick but it's an angle that could work in favor of Severus. I wonder how Sevvie is gonna take the news about Harry wanting to break off the engagement. Probably not so well. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this chapter because it was sooo long. I think it would be better to have longer chapters since you don't update as frequently as us rabid story readers would like you to. But NO CLIFFIES!!! It would kill us to wait so long. *grins*

    I'm in such a good mood, I think I'll read this chapter again! *dances manically around room*
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  • From WarpedMinded on March 17, 2007
    I really like your story. Very good plot and everything. Keep it up!
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  • From Lathea on March 12, 2007
    Yay! Another chapter! And it's LONG! WOHOOO! I love it! But it's so sad Harry's gonna break it off with Severus! Can't you make him see sense? Please?
    I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Isa2012 on February 23, 2007
    I have been really enjoying this story and can't wait for an update. I always love a goos Snarry, and the plot of this one has certainly caught my attention. I can't wait to see how Severus handles both worlds.
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  • From Yocum1219 on February 14, 2007
    Ah, cliffies are torture! Will wait patiently!......but hurry! :D
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  • From LordThingy69 on February 10, 2007
    OMG!! My poor SNAPEY POOH!!

    I am so glad you finally updated. Whoot! *does happy dance*

    Love this chapter! I can't believe you're a Junior in High School writing like this. Weird.....creepy almost. Nevertheless, It's an AWESOME STORY!!! don't take tooooo long to update! Great work!
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  • From tieme on February 06, 2007
    your efforts weren't wasted! ;)
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