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Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

By : Mizzfreestyle
  • From ANON - HazelWolf on November 28, 2006
    Would you please put bottom!name in the summary or warnings, because I don't read fics in this pairing that don't explicitly state dom!Harry (since they tend towards the other nearly exclusively), so I was just wondering if I'm missing out on something I would enjoy.
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  • From ANON - hermoine said so on November 27, 2006
    awwwwww i loved this chapter it's so adorable. i can't wait for you to update soon. please update soon or i'm going to go barking mad.
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  • From ANON - Schnarf on November 27, 2006
    Excellent story, but I'm confused: in Chap 1 Sirius and Remus were trying to convince Harry that marrying Snape was in his best interest, but in Chap 10, he's dead set against them. Is there a reason, or just an inadvertant plot hole?
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  • From ANON - manx on November 26, 2006
    Ok, story is good, but Harry is acting a little "baby-ish". AND childish to boot. He knows how important things are with the Order and Voldie and I thought they had to be careful so Voldie wouldn't find out?
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  • From ANON - tamachan444 on November 26, 2006
    when you say to enjoy the fluff while it lasts... does that mean your going to give this some sort of trajic romeo and juliut type ending? or is the smut coming soon?
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  • From ANON - LordThingy69 on November 26, 2006
    HOLY BEJEEBEES!! I LOVE YOU FOR UPDATING!!!

    Yeah, this was alot of fluff. I still don't get what the dilly was about at the Great Hall and inside Snapes classroom. Why didn't Ron or Hermy tell Harry why everyone was sitting that way? or if they even knew why. That's just so messed up! I love Severus! I love Severus!

    *dances around yelling...I love Severus!. Harry apparates to my home and Stupifies me, claiming that's his MAN!*

    OOHH! Don't keep us waiting so long for the REAL KISS and for another update!!! I was DYING over here waitin'!! LOL

    The carnival was a great idea. Haven't read one of those in a HP/SS courtship story yet. KUDOS!!


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  • From ANON - Sophia on November 26, 2006
    Another excellent chapter. This chapter was really sweet; I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the superb work!
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  • From ANON - The w00t Girl on November 26, 2006
    Aw, it's so fluffy, I cannot wait for the misery to come in and ruin it all. :D Extremely good chapter and loved the few kissing scenes, so cute and fluffy, now bring on the misery and drama. :)
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  • From ANON - moony on November 26, 2006
    you are really really mean...i shouldn't give you reviews until there are real kisses with tongues
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  • From ANON - maria joao on November 26, 2006
    pleaaaaaaase continue...love your story so much...
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  • From ANON - A. Nonnimouse on November 26, 2006
    We-helll... Harry was being a bit of a tease there, wasn't he? I like that in a story, not all out smutsexsmutsmutsex, but love. It is a genuine story, sweet and serious and I love it. I truly cannot wait for more. Zega, O Zega, please hear my call! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - prismakakkerra on November 26, 2006
    OMFG!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?!!! XDDDDD so fucking close!! The sexual tension between them is enough to make me faint and hit my head on my keyboard. You posted after I replied! Thats so awesome! God I havent wanted two people to fuck that bad since Vegeta and Goku!! Someone help me, I swore I wouldnt get into harry potter fics like my crazy friend Chrystal!! Now look at me!! This is hopeless!! Why does yaoi have to be so fucking good when theres a dark evil guy? Vegeta, Muraki, Dee from petshop, Sesshomaru and Naraku! Curse you evil guys and your sexy lets fuck attitudes!! Please post more, I'm begging you from one writter/reader to another. I need it.


    Harry and Snape slash is my new drug of choice



    Prisma Kakkerra, Princess of all Saiyians
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  • From ANON - Marly on November 25, 2006
    Oh great esoteric wise author, giver of excellent fanfiction, my humble idea for a future chapter is to have Harry seriously injured doing something stupid, like leaping off his broom to catch the snitch, during a quidditch match while severus is watching.

    Love love love, update really really soon.

    Don't give up on us baby
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  • From ANON - prismakakkerra on November 25, 2006
    OMFG!! That was so fucking funny!! First off, thank you for not making Harry and Snape so soft and ukish. Harry does hate Snape, and thats why I love the paring. lol. Seond, omg if you dont review, I'll just die! Weres the sexings!! Honeymoon?! And people keep interupting!! God its killing me!! You have to post the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Marly on November 24, 2006
    This is the best story I have ever read on AFF, ever. Ever. Ever ever ever. I'm completely addicted and you must update soon!
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