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Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

By : Mizzfreestyle
  • From ANON - Elfwyn on November 24, 2006
    Major flaw in your logic, if Snape, and all other witches and wizards, must marry before age 40 but why is the Ministry making Harry marry who is only 17 marry now? (If that is the case than all his class mates should be required to marry immediately too.) I can see Snape telling the Ministry he is purposing to someone else not on their list but not the Ministry automatically agreeing for that person. That is nothing but slavery. Also with all the family names dieing out Harry shouldn't have to lose his and automatically take Snape. Snape after all is a muggle name and Potter an old wizarding name. And sorry I don't see boy as being a substitute for love, even for Snape. I do like Harry's gradual warming up to Severus but he is still to submissive. Hope this help, Happy Holidays.
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  • From ANON - Elfwyn on November 23, 2006
    You say Snape isn't the bad guy but he is the one FORCING Harry into marriage. However, that is confusing. Harry is 17 and an ADULT. How did others sign a marriage contract in his name when he is in charge of himself!? Another thing about the story is Harry is too whimpy, he is letting Snape and the others just get away with this without a fight. This was a man who has tormented him for six years, calls him by that hated term "boy" and Harry doesn't say a thing? Come on where is his fire, his spirit. What 17-year-old westerner now days would let someone marry them off. He was not raised as a wizard and his parents did not ok a marriage contract as an child. This is not to say I don't like Harry/Severus just that this seems very out of character so far. One moment you have Sev hurt and sad that Harry doesn't like him then the next he is slyly plotting. And what is with Sirius being ok with Snape, totally OOC.
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  • From ANON - MeAndRossi on November 22, 2006
    ...yay update...i love this story...and Zega...hehe
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  • From ANON - ranni on November 22, 2006
    awesome new chapter! Can't wait to see the next one!
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  • From ANON - rosa on November 22, 2006
    i like the story and hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Draven Wolfe on November 21, 2006
    ihfou;hqjhweeeeeeenjufg2;3oaSDGKJAS *ORGASM ON IMMENSE JOY!* ishaklhtfg5uo;hrjkhqej;rhgio'h;315hqklge

    Now that I am quite done with that, I have one thing to say: WOOHOOOO!!!!!!!!!
    That was a flippin' FANTASTIC chapter!!!! Some parts leave you wondering though. (Those footsteps...hmm....)
    Angelus was a marvelous idea, and I just LOVE the thought of that little Dragon.
    I can't WAIT for your next update (hopefully their first kiss...FINALLY?!)
    Do update soon, I beg of you! ^_^ *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Lord Thingy69 on November 21, 2006
    YESSSS!!! an update! I love this chap! Now I'll be anticepating when they finally will kiss each other senseless! *slaps Sirius for interrupting their 'moment'*

    Just what did Sirius mean when he said he wasn't just worried about Harry. And what's the dilly with those 5th years. Harry should Hex those brats into the last dimension.

    Can't wait to read more. The chapter was worth the wait...but I don't wanna wait that long again! LOL! *Smiles* Update soon. LOVE THIS STORY TO DEATH!!

    *Dances insanely around computer...stumbles and cracks head on desktop*
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 21, 2006
    you tease! I want that kiss, Im waiting for it, it isnt fair. Loved the new chapter. Thanks.
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  • From AngelikRebel on November 21, 2006
    This is a good story. I like it! Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - janie on November 20, 2006
    Wooooo, you updated! I am soo happy since your story is soooo good. Please write soon.
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  • From ANON - Eliza on November 20, 2006
    I really enjoyed this and I hope you continue it soon!
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  • From ANON - moony on November 20, 2006
    hi,the faster you update the happier i will be...this chap was great,but the sexual tnesion is making me crazy
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  • From ANON - Sophia on November 20, 2006
    Yay! Another chapter so soon. I can't wait for the next installment; I like how Harry's ring protects him, who knows what would have happened to him other wise. Keep up the very good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2006
    great
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  • From ANON - LiT on November 20, 2006
    I'm loving this story I wasn't to sure at first how much I was going to like it but now I get all excited when you update lol. keep up the great work.. ~lost in thought~
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