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Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

By : Mizzfreestyle
  • From ANON - ranni on November 04, 2006
    Another great chapter! I'm glad your gonna stop harry from giving snape a hard time.. I feel bad for the guy... Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - tamachan444 on November 04, 2006
    dude! you keep on updating but no new chapters apear! i love this story! please fix the glitch
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  • From ANON - Chys on November 03, 2006
    Good start.
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  • From ANON - tamachan444 on October 31, 2006
    i liked this chapter! update soon please!
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  • From ANON - sodapop0006 on October 30, 2006
    Well, both Harry and Snape seem very OOC to me, but the plot is still enjoyable. I have to keep reminding myself that this isn't the Snape in the books and it's kinda neat to see him with a softer side, as you've written him. I found it a little surprising to see Harry warming up to Snape so easily, but I really liked when you had Snape winking at Harry and sending him gifts. It's quite an abundance of cuteness. :D Good job.
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  • From ANON - Jan on October 29, 2006
    WOW! Love your story. The way that Severus is trying to get Harry to fall for him, and Harry resisting him, at some point I feel bad for him but in others I can understand Harry's hesitance. Love the pase it's going too, I could already see Harry is starting to soften up to Severus a little.
    Keep up the great job.
    Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - kura on October 29, 2006
    i love this fic. when i read it i can realy imagen the pictures with it. please update
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  • From ANON - LordThingy69 on October 28, 2006
    Yay! An update! Whoot! *does backflip*

    I've been dying to read what happened next. I actually like this chapter alot. I love the idea of the 'Golden eyes' although I would have had Snape use it as a tool to possibly get Harry jealous because Snapes new 'eye color' could have made the young impressionable hormonally unbalanced teens at the school start fawning over him because of it and of course since we all know that once someone who we thought only has eyes for us, and repeatedly sought out our affections, but time after time being rejected, once they stop the affection and turn it towards someone else, that person who was getting it becomes completely jealous over not being that persons center of attention anymore whether they actually wanted the affection or not.

    That would have been cool to read Harry getting bitten by the jealous bug cause girls and some guys around the school start fawning over "the professor with Golden Eyes" hey! that sounds like a book title or chapter title! HAHAHAHA! Snape should just make some golden eyes potion just for when Harry starts getting outta hand again. LOL! Could you imagine Ron's reaction if the "gold bug" hits Hermione and she starts fawning over Snape! temporarily that is...until Snape uses the eyedrops again once he's got Harry's attention.

    *laughs as she imagines Snape getting love notes from other students and faculty both openly flirting with him in front of Harry...cackles maniacially*

    Love the "Ghost" moment with the stirring of the cauldron...(the movie Ghost used a clay spinning wheel thingy and clay) The only thing that bothered me was the fact that Harry freaked out about how much it would cost to repay for the clothes. Harry has a shitload of money and he doesn't really care about how much things are and if he wanted to really get rid of the stuff no amount of money would have been too much for him if it meant getting back at Snape or paying a debt. Harry is not frivolous with his money at all but I'm sure he would invest in clothes that were for him anyway, and being responsible enough to want to pay for it no matter the cost instead of being indebted to someone like Snape. Anyway. Hope you update soon...like 4 chapters worth!!!! LOL! I love this story. Just write FASTER!!!

    Take care, peace out! and HURRY UP! LOL!! *smiles*
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  • From ANON - Sarah on October 28, 2006
    I love it please update soon !!
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  • From ANON - The w00t Girl on October 28, 2006
    That is pretty good, I enjoy the whole, Snape moving in on Harry and Harry being an ass, maybe you could give them more reasons to be closer together, along wtih making Harry lighten up a little bit more. Kind of wanting Harry to want more of Snapes touches. :)
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  • From ANON - ranni on October 28, 2006
    I really like this fic, but hell i feel bad for snape. And doesn't that just perplex me... Though i like this more charming snape of yours...(very cool). I understand harry's angry, but i really feel bad for snape cause harry keeps putting him down. Hope the good stuff comes soon!
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  • From ANON - SexyIsSnape126 on October 27, 2006
    I loved this chapter! Severus is so sweet! I'd be all over a man that nice in a second, Harry doesn't deserve him. Of course I'm biased, so just update and all's good. Hope to see soon where this slow relationship is heading.
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 27, 2006
    The story has a wonderful storyline that has kept me glued to my seat. I look forward to reading more about how this story plays out.
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  • From ANON - Lina on October 27, 2006
    UPDATE MORE!!! MORE I SAY!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jill on October 27, 2006
    I do want Harry to give in to Snape but not just yet. Perhaps have Harry not only resist Snape but also his feeling that he has for the man. Harry will miss out a lot og things in life that a young man should experence. Choices that are being taken away. There should be a lot of resentment towards Snape. Even as his feeling grow for the man so should his anger that he didn't have the chance to make that choice. You should be proud of your story. It's really very good. I look forward to the next chapter. thanks Jill
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