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Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

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  • From ANON - dark angel on October 27, 2006
    awwwwwwwwww sooo cooool!!!! can't wait for more!!! brilliant story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2006
    It is great that they are getting closer. I also like that they are like cat and dog. It is so good that you up date often
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  • From ANON - Sophia on October 27, 2006
    A wonderful chapter!! I love all the emotion between them and how Harry is getting along better with Severus. Keep up the great work!!!!
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  • From ANON - Minue on October 27, 2006
    I like your story, but please, get a beta. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes which make it really difficult to concentrate on the story (at least for me). For example, you write eager, instead eagerNESS, and you always write 'get'. Get what? I think you mean 'get out'. Why don't you write it then?
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  • From ANON - IEatDeadBodies on October 27, 2006
    Hey, I love your story, it reminds me of me and a guy I'm with, me being the snape figure and him being the harry figure, except he is in love with me but very scared about it, since he and a girl friend just broke up and they were together for a long time, and he dosent want to be with me, but we can say I
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  • From ANON - Ckeeki on October 27, 2006
    Another great chapter! For Sev's sake, I hope Harry finally gets a clue. Poor Sev! ;D
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  • From ANON - Sno on October 27, 2006
    I like where you're going with this. I also very much like your style. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Lina on October 24, 2006
    OMG!! I LOVE IT!! Please let Harry hold out for a little bit longer!!!! And, i like possesive Snape!!!!!!! Don't let them join together right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ravynsword on October 24, 2006
    I have the feeling that Dumbledore's suggestion is to woo Harry. It will be interesting to see where you go with this. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - K.C. on October 23, 2006
    I really like your fic^^ it's good... and I don't think you make Snape the villian... to me it seems he suffers because Harry is so mean and cold to him... but oh well... I just wanted to say that I like it and I hope you update soon^^
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  • From ANON - glasswalker on October 23, 2006
    *Pleeeeeeez go on!!!!
    I want to know if Harry finally sees the feelings and frustrations and at least gives in!
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  • From ANON - DD Valentine on October 23, 2006
    Oooo!Thia is going so good!!I just love Professor Snape.He is so cool!I would faint if he were to wink at me!Dreamy!!Thanks for the update and I do think Dennis is a little too obssesed with Harry too.
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  • From ANON - fyrefawkes on October 23, 2006
    It seems like Snape is always trying to win Harry through buying him things. Snape is sexy, so use that to win Harry over!
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  • From AkumaKawa on October 23, 2006
    It's interesting.

    Keep up the good work, coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Julia on October 22, 2006
    Why isn't Harry asking any questions of Snape? I mean, doesn't he want to know why the man who is old enough to be his father, is his teacher, and has had nothing but contempt for him for six years suddenly wants to marry him? Doesn't he want to know why Snape never even asked him? Hell, he didn't even tell him, just had Sirius pass on the message. Why doesn't Harry just come out and say, 'no, I'm not going to marry you.' Okay, sure, Snape wouldn't accept that, but that shouldn't stop Harry from trying. If he doesn't want this, he should put it out there and demand Snape explain himself.
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