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Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

By : Mizzfreestyle
  • From ANON - Zal on October 22, 2006
    I am in love with this story! If I have to, I will check for updates everyday...

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2006
    v.good

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  • From ANON - dark angel on October 22, 2006
    great story can't wait for more!!! brilliant!!
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  • From ANON - Katharos on October 21, 2006
    Well, Snape was a little nicer at the end of this chapter so maybe Harry could start being civil as well and start trying to figure out why Snape is courting him, rather than jumping to conclusions. Whatever you do with this story though will turn out great, I'm sure. You've done an awfully good job so far, I've really enjoyed it. I just wish Harry hadn't been such a stubborn gryffindor, but he wouldn't be the Harry we all know and love if he wasn't at least slightly hostile towards Snape in the beginning.
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  • From ANON - mphoenix on October 21, 2006
    i love your writing style. this is truely amazing. update soon.
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  • From ANON - I Eat Dead Bodies on October 21, 2006
    hey, i havent read your storie yet, but i just copyed and pasted it on my comp and ill read it later, if you really need a beta ill do it, i promise i wont change anything, if you like i can make sugjestions and correct the spelling and then ill let you change as u see fit, i dont wont to compramise any artistic anything ^ ^
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  • From ANON - Dreamwind (who is too lazy to log in...) on October 21, 2006
    This story gets better with each chapter!! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - nercomi on October 21, 2006
    your amazing. I am now checking every day to see I you update!
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  • From ANON - tamachan444 on October 21, 2006
    did harry just get a good potions mark?

    maybe for the next chapter snape could get in harry's face alittle and ask him how he can get the relationship to work, maybe one of the things that dumbledore mentioned: "flirt" "mess around". After all if you can't get to teen to like you through conventional methods, try unconventional! then harry can continue to start feeling attracted to severus.

    or

    harry could confront snape about the good mark, and ask him if he's trying to bribe him into going along with the ingagement. and snape could say that he got the grade on his own and that he can be smart if he only tries.
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  • From ANON - Shardae on October 21, 2006
    What did Snape write on Harry's paper???? Add soon...
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  • From ANON - Sophia on October 21, 2006
    Another very nice chapter. I love how it's developing and I cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!!!
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on October 21, 2006
    A nice chapter. I liked the part with the game :) I long to see some more actoin between Harry and Snape. Cross some boundaries. :p
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - emmalee on October 21, 2006
    i love this story ...please continue
    diehard harry/snape shipper :) this is one of the best ones...
    keep writing
    emmalee
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  • From ANON - Hambares on October 21, 2006
    Poor Harry. Maybe if Snape acts like a teenager...
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  • From ANON - Deb on October 21, 2006
    Well, have maybe Snape saying he needes help with potions, and asks Harry. Telling the boy it would be re payment for the clothes. Harry obviously will do it, becuase he would hate being indebt to anyone, or something like that. Hm what else...keeping him behind in potions classes and snogging him sensless of course Harry cant do anything about it, perhaps to his horror he wont want to do anything about it. after snapes kiss maybe hve someone else kissing him, and its clumsy and wrong, doesnt feel right, not like Snapes. thus he starts thinking about the man more, well thats all i can think of bye
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