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Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

By : Mizzfreestyle
  • From ANON - Elizabeth on October 21, 2006
    this chapter was comicly funny. i'm sorry i can't thing of anything to help you write, but i love this story. i really like how you're writing it.
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  • From ANON - Draven Wolfe on October 18, 2006
    Hmm...I've never read a story like this before, and I must say I truly enjoy, though Harry's starting to piss me off. >.
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  • From ANON - ckeeki on October 18, 2006
    I'm loving this fic, please keep writing! But I think Harry is being a bit nasty to Snape - where's the love? ;p
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  • From ANON - moi on October 16, 2006
    i like the way Harry is playing hard to get and how Severus seems to actually care.

    hope you post soon~
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  • From ANON - Wendy on October 16, 2006
    I do believe that poor Harry is fighting a loosing battle and I am also finding myself cheering Sev on.
    Thankyou for a great story.
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  • From ANON - LordThingy69 on October 15, 2006
    God I wished Harry would have hexed Snape into the next millenium. Don't get me wrong I LOVE Snape, but that was totally uncalled for and embarrassing. Harry should flirt some more in front of Snape. It's hilarious! but overall I think it was a nice trip. Would have like to hear more comments and thoughts from Snape and Harry while in the clothing store. Also, the Bludgerers are called BEATERS...LOL...it took me a bit to figure out that's what you meant. *smiles* I Would love to read longer chapters of this story because it has immense potential to be an awesomely huge epic with possible after married life type sequel..especially since Voldemort isn't a prominant character in this perticular story. I don't mind betaing for you. It would be a first for me but I usually wind up correcting errors on fics when I save it to read later anyway. Just let me know okay?
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  • From ANON - LordThingy69 on October 15, 2006
    I was sooo thrilled to log on and see a new chapter!! *squees* I totally love your story. I think the fun for me is Harry's avoidance and rebelliousness to Snapes engagement entrapemrn. I would like to see Harry rip Sirius and Remus a new asshole for accepting the ring on his behalf and not consulting him first. Of course in the end Sevvy pooh and Harry will be together but I just love all hide and seek stuff. WHOOT!!
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  • From ANON - glasswalker on October 15, 2006
    PLEEEEEEZ go on! I'm starved for the story! It killing me to wait another day! I love the small gestures and how Harry slowly gets to like him... MORE PLEEEZ!
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  • From ANON - Sophia on October 15, 2006
    Another wonderful chapter!! Harry is starting to give in and I loved their trip to London and how possessive Severus was being in the restaurant. Keep up the great work!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cindy on October 15, 2006
    I love the story. Can't wait to see when Harry finally gives into Severus.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on October 15, 2006
    Nice chapter. It seems like Harry is finally opening up to Snape. :) I wonder what the others' reaction will be when they find out, that they have been to London together :p . Hurry up with the up-date! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - LordThingy69 on October 14, 2006
    I really love this story so far. However, I am really liking Harry's resistance to acknowledging Snape and their impending marriage which I hope Harry finds a way to temporarily prevent just so the tension and his resistance will go on longer. I love it! Don't make Harry too weak against Snapes attempts to seduce him. Meaning, like if Snape kisses him or whatever, don't have Harry all weak in the knees ready to sign the wedding certificate because of it...you know. Harry is stronger than that. I still think he should still mess with Cho. Play around with Snapey poo emotions a bit longer...a pissed snape is a cool snape!! LOL maybe around chapter 20 you could loosen Harry up to Snape..but right now this resistance is just tooo cool. Also, I love LONG chapters!! Thanks! Your story rocks.
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  • From ANON - ME! (Manda) on October 14, 2006
    Wow, this is really great! I really like it, and hope you choose to continue it! You asked if there was any noticeable glitches though, so I thought I should just inform you of the ones I noticed. One, Cho Chang is in a grade higher than Harry. At first I thought you were going to say they were in the same Potions class because it was like some advanced class or something, but then you said they were in almost all the same class so... Then I just noticed a few minor miss used words that were no big deal. Like I think it was in the second chapter where it said Dumbledore took a swig of his tear instead of tea. I
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  • From ANON - Dragonero on October 13, 2006
    A very good chapter! Better than the last two! I think it was more serious, not the plot, but the way you have written it! One could even feel sorry for snape! I wonder if he will give up! (:-) not really!) Please, update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - fyrefawkes on October 13, 2006
    More more more!!! This is really good so far. I just hope you don't make Snape too mushy; you are balancing it well enough now though. Keep it up!
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