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Reviews for Won't You Please Stay With Me?

By : Mizzfreestyle
  • From ANON - glowing_haven on October 01, 2006
    Okay what to say...how about this...DON'T you dare not to continue this story.
    I think it's great and if all the other readers out there aren't too lazy you'll have many reviews very soon.
    So I hope you're updating again very soon.
    Thanks :-)
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  • From ANON - Sadsally on October 01, 2006
    Oh this is so good. I have read many other, Harry is forced to marry Severus. but this one is just so much better.
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  • From ANON - sevs_lil_secret on October 01, 2006
    I would very much like to see you continue this. It's an interesting idea and one I think could be done up quite well. I'm not trying to be rude, but I would suggest finding a good beta. I know it helped me a great deal when I finally sucked it up and asked someone to look over my work. Keep up the good job and I look forward to more from you.
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  • From ANON - AislinnNicole on October 01, 2006
    Your first fan fic, huh? I'd say you were doing very well so far, and you've definitely got me interested. I'd love for you to write more of this story; it has great potential!

    You might want to do a quick spell and grammar check before posting, but otherwise, you write very well! If you'd like a beta (someone who helps you edit), I'd be more than willing to help out... just shoot me an email.

    I hope you update soon because I'll definitely be looking for more!!!
    ~Aislinn
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  • From ANON - Redlightspin on October 01, 2006
    harry can probably understand how that cat felt when skunk Pepe Le Peou chased her in the loony toons cartoons
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  • From ANON - Lee on October 01, 2006
    Promising beginning!
    Engaged story with a lovely twist.
    Hope to read more and soon.

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  • From ANON - Sydney on October 01, 2006
    I like it. Hope you continue it.
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  • From ANON - Jet on October 01, 2006
    Good start. Can't wait to read more............Jet
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