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Reviews for Augury & Ardor

By : SnapeySnax
  • From ANON - lisa on October 23, 2006
    Yes finaly. Hermione has her Severus. awwww I love it. And I love all the lemony goodness.and that was sooo sweet how Severus was finaly holding his son. and lol I can realate to how Hermione fet seeing Severus with their son. woooohoooo. good chappie and I am hanging in there to see the end. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 23, 2006
    I just read the whole story. You are genius. I expected naive, inexperienced writing, and lots of gramatical errors (because that's what I usually get) but this story was far from that. In the beginning I didn't quite know what to think..but the story just kept getting better.
    The sex scenes were so hot, and the last few chapters were really emotional. I love how you can make Severus cold and snarky but a bit fluffy too. Er that might not be the right word. I just got the image of a bunny rabbit with Snape's head. OK ok back to the review. Some parts of the story made me laugh out loud, there was one part in the early chapters...hmm I don't remember.
    I was scared you had killed Severus!!
    Good thing you didn't. *rubs hands together evilly*
    Bah humbug Snape's trial was perfect, not like I would have noticised if you had made a mistake with any of that law BS.
    The last part of chapter twenty was really sweet. Haha go Hermione for making him say it!
    I think this is enough for me. Hopefully you'll continue writing great SS/HG stories after you're finished with this one.
    -Cara
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  • From SorceressFujin on October 22, 2006
    Excellent as always!! I am looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Yuki on October 22, 2006
    Waaaah!!! This is soo great!! X3 Hermione is so awesome! I love how you wrote this X3 When are you going to update next? I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione and Severus reunite X3
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  • From ANON - ldf on October 22, 2006
    lovely court room scene. just lovely.

    i had really hoped that Nothus would
    explode. you know, that would have been
    fun to watch. pardon me, i'm sick that
    way.

    but i enjoyed this chapter, as i have
    every other one that's come before it.
    this is such a wonderful story.

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 22, 2006
    omg I was so worried for Severus but lol Hermione and Dumbledore sure put on quite a show. that was good. but now I cannot wait to see how it goes after Severus is freed. She layed it all out for him to see that she loves him but whether he accepts is another thing. I hope he doesn't get bitter and cold again. He needs to seize the day or girl if u will and finally get a little happiness of his own making. good chappie I am happy the trials over. more please. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jaxxia on October 22, 2006
    This is so good. I just spent the entire day reading this. It's a very different perspective from what I've seen. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - unknown on October 22, 2006
    That was awesome must find out what happens nest please keep writing.

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  • From ANON - ldf on October 21, 2006
    well crafted mystery and intrigue,
    my dear. i cannot wait to see what
    happens when Hermione takes the
    stand.

    i do hope she gives them what for.

    this is such a good story and i'm
    anxious to see how you end it. and
    i'm forcing myself from going and
    reading the rest on Ashwinder. i
    like the waiting and letting the
    tension build.

    great work!

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - ejana on October 20, 2006
    I am really enjoying this, thank you.
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 20, 2006
    wow this is a really great fic, you have somehow maaged to keep me hanging on the edge of my seat hungry for more...plz update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Mir on October 20, 2006
    Do you realize what I've done for you!? The sacrifice i've gone through? The torment and tribulation!? And you leave me with this?! HOW DARE YOU DO THIS TO ME! IT IS UNACCEPTABLE AND NOW I'M CRYING, AND SHAKING, AND I HAVE A GOOD FIVE HOURS OF HOMEWORK LEFT, WON'T GET ANY SLEEP TONIGHT AND WILL BE TIRED AT SCHOOL IN THE MORNING! ....... I'm sorry.... I found this story two days ago and haven't slept well since. And right now i just need a good cry... and it doesn't help we're writing stories in English, and all i think about is how freakin' fantastic this is and how i can't wait to read more, and now.... there is none!

    Please.... if you have a heart... have any mercy for mankind.... hurry with the next chapter.... please...

    ----Mir....
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 19, 2006
    ohhh no. Poor Hermione. I cannot believe he would do this. I mean I understand and all but geez. and Ugg Hermione is just letting him go without telling him how she feels about everything. She could've told him she loved him and didn't want to remarry and wasn't going to accept his divorce thus forcing his hand one way or the other. lol not that I disliked this chappie. I liked it. I love the story. It just seems she gave up without a fight. all that sneaking out and all
    just to not say anything else. I'd be pissed and hurt and lol I would have yelled my bloody had off at him. at least let him know what i was feeling. Lol but oh well I am upset at Hermione lol. good chappie and nice touch with Ron coming around. Update soon Please. ttfn.

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  • From ANON - Yuki on October 18, 2006
    WAAAAH! I LOVE THIS!!! X3 When's the next update =X I love your story!!
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  • From ANON - ldf on October 18, 2006
    what can i say?....

    just one thing....

    DAMN! i love this fic!

    ~blessings~
    me
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