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By : BlindedHP
  • From ANON - Serpenteyes on October 12, 2006
    Interesting. I will continue reading this story.
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  • From ANON - vampchic on October 12, 2006
    I think, perhaps, you should start ignoring your reviewers altogether and just write this fic the way you want. If that includes spelling errors and grammer, so be it, as long as you enjoy what you're writing. You can always find a beta later. I find that when one does not enjoy their own writing, it shows. So I say, as long as you enjoy it, who cares what others think. If they don't like it, they can go write their own fic.
    You had another excellent chapter. I felt bad for poor Harry, first with his punishment then being stampied. That had to of hurt. Then to discover the scar he will have to bare for life...I hope Snape will be able to find a spell to remove it, or that Poppy can do it.
    I like how you're having him gradually stand up for himself. I'd imagine that the spell Snape cast will be quite the pain throughtout the school year lol. That should be interesting to read lol.
    I'm really looking forward to the next chap, and remember, write it for yourself. ^_^
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  • From ANON - DayRaven94 on October 12, 2006
    Okay first of all eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......I found a fic with a Dom/sub pairing involving two of my favorite pairings that's actually really good so yay, now second of all I just wanted to say I like how you have your time-line going in here and what I mean by that is how you don't beat around the bush but you don't go so fast that it seems rushed,hectic, or boring take your pick either, your a really good writer and I hope you continue this story till the end and update soon^^

    *yes I know I make no sense*

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  • From ANON - Veronica on October 12, 2006
    Happy DANCE!!!! Such a good fic, please write more asap!!
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on October 11, 2006
    I like your story so far, I do. I do agree that you need a beta, but I think that's pretty standard for most authors. I think especially being that english isn't your first language. I noticed in the later chapters that you used the word 'had' a lot, a bit too much. I'm just not sure if this was something that just started or if I just didn't notice it until later. But other than that I didn't really notice any major spelling/grammar problems. So basically your doing good for yourself, but a beta wouldn't hurt. Wow, so much writing just to say something simple. Sorry, I tend to get a bit long-winded.

    On to the storyline more, I wish you'd addressed the abuse a bit more. In the context of your story and the way your writing it it's really not necessary, but personally I would have liked to see more of the reactions to finding out that Harry had been raped/molested/sexually abused. So many ways to say it but I'm not sure which would be the most appropriate. Also I would love to see something happen to his uncle (and aunt if she was involved) and maybe Harry's "customers". Even if they don't report it to the authorities (magical or otherwise) and have Vernon arrested and tried, it would be nice to see something bad happen to the sick perverted bastard. Anyways that's all, I liked it so far and I can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - Sally Ann on October 11, 2006
    Your grammar is awfull but I don't care, your story is great! I like how Harry is getting more independent, but trusts Sev still. And I'm really happy about his friendship with Draco. Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on October 11, 2006
    Nooo! Dont stop there! I want to know what the punishment is!
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on October 11, 2006
    ^_^ Really liked this chapter. Nice job. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - vampchic on October 11, 2006
    Ugh, I hate flamers. Most of them are just jealous of a persons writing skills and their original ideas. Don't let them get to you. You're an excellent writer and I suspect that if you focus your talent on an actual novel, you'd be able to publish without much difficulty.
    Excellent chapter. You sped through Harry's third year while explaining the important parts. The fourth year should prove interesting with the Tri-wizard Tournament. Will Harry be a part of it, or will he be spared? Can't wait to read of the his punishment. I find that that has come to be my favorit part of the fic lol You're ideas are quite creative lol Cant wait for the next update. I'm just loving this fic.
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  • From ANON - Kateri on October 11, 2006
    Great chapter
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  • From ANON - kuzzzmanya on October 11, 2006
    get yourself a beta as
    a) your grammar skills are unsatisfactory
    b) you try to tell of a whole school year in one chapter and as a result get a crash, a mix, a crumble in place of a plotline
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  • From ANON - Sophia on October 11, 2006
    Another magnificent chapter and most certainly entertaining. I love how you manage to include the important bits from each book. His fourth year is definitely going to be interesting to read. Keep up the magnificent work!!!!
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  • From ANON - Olivia on October 10, 2006
    Fwaa!~
    I sense DRAMA on the horizon!
    Batten the main mast, pull in the sails!
    Feed the giant squid!
    xD
    I'm hyper.
    Thanks for the update, I'm glad you focus on both POV's and how the relationship is progressing.
    It's a wonderful touch how Sev worries about his preformance.
    Excelente.
    Update soon?
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  • From ANON - vampchic on October 10, 2006
    Hmm...I'm a little surprised that Harry didn't have a "run in" with a snake while picking out his "bird". Creative idea there, giving him a parrot lol. Wonder when everyone will find out he speaks parsaltongue? Now that the school year will be starting up, how will Ron treat Harry, seeing as Harry saved his sister's life. Interested to see how you will write up the third year as well. Cant wait for the next update. You're doing an excellent job.
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  • From ANON - Marius on October 10, 2006
    I like your story so far, but this chapter had some inconsistencies. Severus can't know that Sirius is an animagus, least of all a dog, since nobody knew except the marauders, not even Dumbledore. Also, why doesn't he tell Harry they are afraid Black is after him? He tells him everything else.
    Then, I think you need a beta for your spelling and grammar. I know you want a beta with real life knowledge of BDSM, but first things first.
    At last, in my opinion you should delete the "this is no copy" disclaimer in your summary. Since it is very easy to see that your story is not at all a copy of another, it gives the impression you are either very insecure, or use it as a clever advertising to make people read your story. In the first case, I can only say don't be, your writing is great, even if a beta could improve it. About the latter, well... you have to know yourself if you want people to read your story for itself or because you use another writer as figurehead.
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