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By : BlindedHP
  • From ANON - Sophia on October 10, 2006
    Another excellent chapter. If you want Sirius to be more in canon then he should probably flip out a bit when he hears about it, but then I think you should make him understand the situation and be supportive (there aren't a lot of fics out there like that). But it's your fic, so you make the decisions, lol. Keep up the great work!!!
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  • From ANON - Olivia on October 09, 2006
    Hmmm...
    As far as I can see you seem to be doing very well.
    This has good character development and is building nicely as time progresses.
    Severus's actions seem very in character for the situation provided, and the essay was a good idea.
    =3
    Keep it up.
    =D
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on October 09, 2006
    Very very good. Me like!
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  • From ANON - vampchic on October 09, 2006
    Curious to know what Harry's punishment will be, the last one was quite creative. I think you're doing an excellent job with the whole D/s part of the fic. I wouldn't worry about it too much, and anything you have questions on, you can do research on.
    http://www.sandm.com/p/146.html
    http://www.flashback.se/archive/asbfaq_i.html
    Hopefully these will be of help. I found them quite useful myself.
    Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - momoko on October 09, 2006
    good story, I like it, bye
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  • From ANON - amarilis on October 09, 2006
    This story is amazing!! I really like the way you presented Severus and Harry's relationship. It is interesting to see how Severus' feeling develop.
    Keep up with the great work!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sophia on October 09, 2006
    Another excellent chapter. I really love how you are writing this and how some of the same events occur. I truly cannot wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the superb work.
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on October 09, 2006
    I'm really liking where you're going with this. If I knew more about these types of relationships, I would help you with anything in a second. Sadly, I don't. ^_^" But I think you're doing an awesome job so far. Keep it up. ^_^
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on October 09, 2006
    Your first language wasn't English? Could've fooled me. I think that your English is very well compared to others. I know. Trust me. I have pen pals who are learning English in Malaysia, Denmark, and France. But that is cool that you know another language. Anyways, about your fan fic. I think it's going just swell so far! I can understand that you need ideas. I do too for my fic. Anyways, maybe you can have Harry get into some trouble with Malfoy. Like, say that Malfoy decides to pick a fight with Harry and Snape has to help Harry out. Harry then can trust Snape a little more. I'm not sure. So, tell me, how is it like living in South Africa? Are you looking for a penpal?! What is your first language? Maybe I can help you expand your English!
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  • From ANON - s_hill2188@yahoo.com on October 08, 2006
    Love it! Update quickly, please?
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  • From ANON - gndmlvr01 on October 07, 2006
    Another update! *cheers* Your English is really good (especially when compared to my Spanish - ew), so don't worry too much about that.
    Sev's awesome!
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on October 07, 2006
    I like this fic. I believe it has potential. I know what you mean when you say that you are having problems continuing/ you don't know what to write. It's the same for me. I really don't know what to write. I have ideas, but I'm afraid the readers won't like them. If you want, I could Co-author with you. If you have an AIM, then look on my profile, find mine, and IM me one day. I would be more than happy to help you. I actually kinda wanted to after reading this first chapter. Good luck!

    -Zega
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  • From ANON - twichy on October 06, 2006
    I NEED MORE! please give me more. feed the hungry reader!
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  • From ANON - DARRENA on October 06, 2006
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Sacharissa on October 06, 2006
    yeppers,
    that sounds like a good idea.

    I love this story, don't stop writing!

    Sacharissa

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