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By : BlindedHP
  • From ANON - mrpage on October 05, 2006
    You're doing great for English not being your first language, sweetie. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Olivia on October 05, 2006
    For now I think a pre-relationship would be best.
    Don't worry about your Grammar or spelling, you're doing great!
    Lets see, I've never been in a lyfestyle relationship, but I do know a lot so I may be able to help...
    In fact, why dont you just have co-betas?
    More than one could help with certain facts on such relationships...
    You can get ahold of me at goombahann1@hotmail.com in email or MSN messenger, if you should wish to!
    Keep up the fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on October 05, 2006
    I really like where this is going, and I love the length of the chapters. I think you're doing a wonderful job, and I can't wait until the next chapter. *twirls*
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  • From ANON - manda on October 05, 2006
    loved the chapter ^_^ by the way i find your grammer very good
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  • From ANON - Veronica on October 05, 2006
    The sequal sounds great. Also just an idea but boys usually start getting sexual urges around 12-15 you could write something about Harry not knowing excatly what to do when he gets an erection that doesn't want to go away and have to ask his master about it. The you could see how Severus deal with that infront of Harry as well as what his thoughts are afterwards when Harry leaves to err deal with the 'problem'.
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  • From ANON - spintergp on October 05, 2006
    still great!!!
    I thought your grammer and language skills were fine. Don't worry. As to whether you should split the relationship between school and after or as you say pre-relationship and relationship. It might be a good idea.
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  • From ANON - vampchic on October 05, 2006
    You really are quite the speedy writer. I love how you just pop these chapters out lol. And for english not being your first language, you're doing an excellent job. I wouldn't worry too much about the grammer, that's a struggle for everyone lol But a good beta should be enough help with that.
    I think, for the most part, you should just focus on Harry learning to be a real sub and trying to come to terms with his past. Abuse victims tend to get a little angry about what happened to them once they relaized just what had happened to them. I would expect that once Harry is a little older, he would be quite angry at Vernon, and maybe a little rebelious towards Snape.
    I look forward to the next chapter. I'm interested to see how Harry's second year of Hogwarts goes and if anyone ever figures out about his submissiveness. I get the impression that Draco will probably be one of those people, though I don't know how you'll have him behave. I'm curious to know if you'll ever have Ron and Hermoine become Harry's friends, or if Ron will continue to taunt him.
    Cant wait for the next update, I'm really loving this fic.

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  • From ANON - melodelic on October 05, 2006
    I really like your idea and I hope you stick to both stories, the first and then the second.
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  • From ANON - Kateri on October 05, 2006
    Great chapter, I liked the meeting with Draco
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  • From ANON - Rosei on October 05, 2006
    I really, really like your story.
    It's terrific. Thanks R
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2006
    I can't wait for your version of year three..Sirius escaped the prison because he saw wromtail in the newspaper in rat form if i remember correctly...i'm really intererested him how Sirus will react to his best friends son being taken care of by his enemy. please don't make sirius bad..just...overly gryffindor...as in acting withotu thinking. Like maybe have sirius kidnap harry and think that Snape just recently tried to convert harry to being a Sub...like in siriuses mind have him think that harry came from the dursleys normal and "that greasy git" corrupted him...and then be taught otherwise...i think it could be a great adventure...and a funny one at that. ..well...kinda sad as well..but...still..it would be great.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2006
    I'm glad that you showed his interaction with Draco....and how confused draco got..that was just priceless.
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  • From ANON - Kitsune Spyk (to lazy to log in) on October 05, 2006
    I really like this story thus far. Your grammer really isn't bad, if you hadn't said anything I would have never known... in fact I've seen much worse from people who have spoken english all their life...

    Keep up the good work... and please continue updating. I would be very grateful.
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  • From ANON - Sophia on October 05, 2006
    Another very well written chapter. I really like how it's developing. I like the idea of this fic concentrating on the pre-relationship part and a sequel concentrating more on the sexual aspect of the relationship. Keep up the marvelous work.
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  • From ANON - Olivia on October 04, 2006
    :O
    Lets go beat up those silly Gryfindors.
    Cmon.
    It'll be fun.
    n.n
    I offer you chocolate covered Snape goodness in exchange for another chapter.
    You know you want it!
    ;]
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