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Reviews for A New Order of Wizards - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Paris on November 15, 2006
    Yay...update soon.
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  • From ANON - moxie on November 15, 2006
    aaaaahhhh - what a sweet chapter! Lovely! It was so, so SWEET. I liked how they made up. really. and I love how they are slowly getting closer.
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  • From ANON - Pam on November 15, 2006
    Great post, love this story, please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - JW on November 15, 2006
    Ch 26 - I'm glad she didn't blast him. While his anti-Mudblood views were always wrong, he is trying to change now, and it takes a while to undo generations of such teaching. One cannot change a mindset in just a few hours, even with magic. She should give him another couple hours (snerk!). BTW, loved the lines about "you make an excellent sex toy" and "blond bimbo."
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  • From ANON - angel on November 15, 2006
    ~lol~ that was great im glad they are talking again.... i love it and how he got her back in to this bed ..please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on November 15, 2006
    Come out ahead in the long run? I thought she came out ahead already right here! Let's see... He's searched her out. He's told her he is okay with having the child with her? He showed concern for her health... and he admitted to wanting to shag her senseless! Hmmm... besides coming out with the fact taht he does truly LOVE her, what else does he need to do?

    I love it! Perfect chapter! I want more soon! PLEASE?
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on November 15, 2006
    Great chapter and a very good talk; I loved the verbal sparring!

    And you're right; cutting off his nuts would have been a bit harsh ^^ Showing his interest in the baby is a good start; more of that would be a plus!
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 14, 2006
    that was a GREAT chapter! i do so love what draco did it was really smart, besides it got lucius thinking. now things will start working out, right? (just so you know that the ending of that last sentence was slightly histarical.) update soon!
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on November 14, 2006
    To Moxie re depression -

    You are correct about the length of time it would normally take for a moderate case of depression to subside. I was faced with either being true to medical science or shortening the amount of time when Lucius and Hermione weren't together. I foreshortened the time element for the depression so Lucius could interact with Hermione sooner. Having Hermione and Lucius go for several months apart, or having Lucius incapacitated for months would have dragged my story line down. So maybe the reader can employ the time-honored fanwank (as I did) and go with the idea that magic folk are different, or that magic medicine is more effective than Muggle medicine. Will that serve?
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  • From ANON - moxie on November 14, 2006
    I was thinking...if Lucius were really that depressed it would take longer than two weeks or even just a few weeks for him to get out of it. And the way in which you write, it seems like a lot more time has passed. It would make more sense if more time passed - like a few months. My two cents.
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on November 14, 2006
    Some answers:

    For JW a picture of a flail, although I probably should have used the term cat o' nine tails.

    http://www.schenz.com/cgi/store3/search.cgi?user_id=id&database=dbase3.txt&template=template1.htm&0_option=1&0=6981a

    For Philosopher - you are correct. And Chapter three it is. To quote Lucius, "You do realize that with these anklets on all Purebloods, I am not able to touch anyone else, even after you conceive. I
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  • From ANON - Rosei on November 14, 2006
    Wow! What a beautiful story this has turned out to be.
    Thanks!
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  • From ANON - *DB* on November 13, 2006
    @25. awesome chapter. can't wait for the next. please update soon
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  • From ANON - JW on November 13, 2006
    Ch 22-25 - ooh, you are a busy author!! Thank you for all the new chapters. Such a lovely visit with Draco and baby. Umm... photo of "flail," please? I only know about Medieval-type flails - the ones with a spiked ball at the end, used in warfare. (!!!!) So Draco knows he's getting a half-sibling and doesn't mind? Oh, and I liked having Hermione summon Severus to help her with Lucius; nothing like having a good friend there when in trouble.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on November 13, 2006
    Smart Draco. He knew how to kick old dad in the pants. But I'm a little worried about Hermione's fallout. Now that she won't have to worry about Lucius dying or getting sick, what is she going to feel? I just think she must be terribly lonely, even with the sex. She's so trapped with Lucius, and that she could forgive Harry for saddling her with him is past angelic, so I wait to see her finally lose it for her situation.
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