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Reviews for A New Order of Wizards - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe

From ANON - ccrawley on October 28, 2006
hot, hot.
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From ANON - angel on October 28, 2006
wow that was awesome .. i love it .... heheh i cant wait to read more soo please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more later for now

angel
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From ANON - Ladytalon on October 28, 2006
*fans wildly* That was sooooooooooo hot. Oh, my.

I like to read as well as write Submissive!Lucius but I've never been able to imagine him being spanked, let alone write it...excellent job, m'dear. Wow. I was planning on having Hermione torment Lucy/Lucius over in Creampuff ever since I first thought of the story idea but I don't know now...how can I top that? ;) I think I need to read it again.
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From ANON - moxie on October 28, 2006
I want to kidnap you, tie you up and make you write for me forever. I *loved* this chapter. It was so, SO good. I LOVED the spanking. I usually don't like Dom!Hermione but you've written her excellently here. And Lucius was so yummy here. Loved the little goodnight kiss at the end (awh).
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From ANON - LaBibliographe on October 28, 2006
Snakelette said, "I'm having a little trouble believing Lucius would submit to a woman, even in play,..."

Do you think he submitted to her? Really submitted? Or was she serving his purpose just as he wanted? Who orchestrated the whole evening's entertainment? Hermione certainly added unexpected frills and she's no one's pushover. But she's got a ways to go. I love Lucius - he's such a devil. The bigger their egos are, the harder they fall.

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From ANON - Snakelette on October 28, 2006
Wow! This is a great story! Even though I love Lucius, I would strangle Harry if I was Hermione. But they may as well have some fun together, right? I'm having a little trouble believing Lucius would submit to a woman, even in play, but it was still very hot! And Hermione is a great mistress. I hope for more lemons soon!

And as for any future children; I think/hope Lucius' Malfoy-pride will be stronger than his pureblood-pride; after all, their children will be Malfoys even if they're not pureblood.

Loved it. Thanx!
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From ANON - PAMELA WILLIAMS on October 28, 2006
Well, looks like they both got what they wanted. Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
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From ANON - Morrigan on October 28, 2006
*fainting dead away*
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From ANON - LupinsLady on October 27, 2006
That was just mind blowing. Wow, I want to be Hermione. This story is hotter then ever. Good Job.
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From ANON - JW on October 27, 2006
Ch 17 - ooh, this is getting more fun! So, is he really going to use "used" equipment on her? :=( More spanking for cheapskate Lucius!
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From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2006
Please tell that they start to have actual feelings for each other other than sexual lust. I really like the story though!!! Please update soon!!!!
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From ANON - Ladytalon on October 26, 2006

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From ANON - C_Dog on October 26, 2006
You know, I think that this pairing is severely underappreciated. Fire and ice just seem to go so well together, don't they? As for the story, beautifully written and wonderfully thought out. It's quickly becoming my new clandestine fetish. Thank you for letting me read your work; I can't wait to read more!
C_Dog
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From ANON - LaBibliographe on October 26, 2006
A reply to purrfus' question. The question deals with what has gone before in the story, not what will happen in the future, so I'm willing to answer with my take on it. Harry wasn't trying to be mean to Hermione, or ruin her life. He needed someone to control the person he saw as the major threat left against the Light. He has taken on the management of the whole wizarding world as his job. He asked her to take on crushing the only real threat left by marrying Lucius. She hated being asked to do it and having Harry put the job onto her. But Harry trusted her more than anyone else in their world to accomplish that task. And she knows it under all her resentment.

That's the backstory in my head. Apologies if the prologues weren't clear enough. I hope this helps.
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From ANON - Shilohdarke on October 26, 2006
Oooooooooh! I loved it! Spanking??? Oh and he's willing to let her spank him? Damn!!! I want to take a round or two at that awesome pale hiny!!! And I can't wait for what is going to happen tonight... Loved it! Please update soon!

Shiloh
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