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Reviews for Salvation

By : ElegantMaverick
  • From ANON - arealdeal on December 17, 2006
    Poor Draco, maybe this time Harry will be smarter than he usually is in stories and "get it" Anxiously awaiting more.
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  • From ANON - jay on December 10, 2006
    this fanfic is really sic and awesome. u should keep going im in love with it. it truly is amazing considering ur the first person i consider to have such amazing work that i want continued. please write more chapters
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  • From ANON - Keba-kun on December 10, 2006
    OooOooOooOoo...i like this story! ^.^ They got drunk, and it was all funny. XD -tee hee- Please update soon!!! -gets on knees-
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  • From ANON - Tac on December 08, 2006
    Aw poor Harry at a wedding! If I were Hermione I would've kicked his ass for looking grumpy on her wedding day but then again if I were Harry I would've kicked Ginny's ass - baby or no lol. I'm loving the image of those two drunk and just imagined the reactions if they'd gotten pissed at the wedding! I wonder where Harry went.. Can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - wizli on December 07, 2006
    I knew the morning after wasn't going to be pretty but I didn't expect Harry's attitude. Poor Draco, I almost felt him crumble when he noticed Harry had left. Next chapter, please! ^^.
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  • From LoveGD on December 04, 2006
    Love where you're going with this, can't wait to see what you do next!
    //LoveGD
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  • From ANON - alyxanderson on December 04, 2006
    "there's more at my house" ooooo me thinks they might get a bit too drunk and do something stupid, well for our sakes hot and steamy and sexy and wonderful...
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 04, 2006
    I bet that was a nightmare for them both! Can't wait for chapter 8!
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  • From ANON - Tac on December 03, 2006
    Oh and reading the other reviews - just because SOME people don't like the kind of story you're writing doesn't mean it isn't awesome. If it's not constructive about your writing ignore it. Sob stories and immaturity happen in life, get over it. That's actually what most stories are about working through. *gasp* how novel! lol.
    There aren't black and white boxes for events - people are irrational and immature most of the time. I think the rationality you have behind the story works perfectly - Dumbledore's blood is different from any-old-blood because of what it represents. Sorry if this addition seems pointless but if a review isn't encouraging I don't think it should be posted.
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  • From ANON - Tac on December 03, 2006
    You reeeeally have to update this! I wish I could be constructive but at the moment my brain isn't really in order. I loved reading this - so many times I just had to giggle out loud or lean forward in my seat and it's only six chapters! I love how in-character Draco and Harry are, their interaction is realistic and feels like an extension of the books even though the end of the war was glossed over - it's not part of the plot so that's fine. I also like the realism you've given this story in the emotions and events and I would love another chapter! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - okay on December 02, 2006
    the last two chapters here (on chpt 6 now) make up for the first 4 in a big way. Actually got somewhere believably. No shouting contests that just spouted the same sob story for pity disgusied as lonliness but understanding of those basics and very human way to move forward. I am not saying what I want to say right but I really like chapter 5 and 6.
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  • From ANON - so what on December 02, 2006
    quote---You aren't the only one that thought I had failed when I didn't kill him. When I went back to the Dark Lord I had to plead just for him to not murder me on the spot! I had to beg to keep my life because I couldn't take another's! Do you know how much blood I had to spill and abuse I had to take to get back in the group just so I could get you the information you so desperately needed?! Do you have any idea what I had to go through just so I could help you!? No! I don't think you do!" Draco wished there weren't witness around so he could brutalize Harry.---end quote

    Okay well Draco did fail at the task Voldemort set for him. Whether or not Draco was going to be a spy he would of had to spill blood and take the abuse Voldemort dished out. That is the life a Death Eater. Nothing particuarl special about that. People who are rotting in Azkaban did the same thing. Why would they belive Draco to be a spy anymore than they would Snape to be not trustwrothy?

    (Unless this fic spouts the very untrue reason that Snape was really a bad guy. It was so obvoius that he was good in Book 6 such Snape-really-bad!fics are silly. But that's Gryiffindor blinders for you.)And I am sure no one asked Draco to be a spy for the Light. No one asked Draco to kill people (spill blood) in order to get information. It is like defeating the purpose of NOt killing Dumbledore. And Dumbledore's purpose of trying to save him. It would be more convincing that he didn't want to be a bad guy to just seek out the Light before killing anyone.....maybe.

    I love HP/DM but as far as this fic is concerned if everytime Harry sees Draco and just a bit of dread pops up, it is understandable. Apparently not so great things happen when he is around. Apparently Harr never really trusted Draco. Just by writing Harry to be a most 'ungrateful' and immature character won't change the fact that his reaction and dislike are to be expected and normal. He can overcome this but Hermione's whining and chastising are not the way. People don't like to be told what to do or how to feel. It just makes them more hard headed. Encouraging encounter and letting things work out by themselves is better.

    Guess my point is the both Draco and Harry sob story in this fic. But since they are both equally tragic the 'oh, I didn't realise' factor is not working cause it goes both ways. DM and HP don't know anything about each other but it is what they do know that they don't like despite their hardships. The best argument so far has been 'Harry, the world doesn't revolve around you.' but then an equally valid argument is ' I don't like him have good enough reason not to, so deal with it.'
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  • From ANON - alyxanderson on December 02, 2006
    more please!!
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  • From ANON - Amessis on December 02, 2006
    Well done! the poor guys.
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  • From ANON - Lu on November 30, 2006
    i LIKE it
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