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Reviews for His Only Love: Her Only Hate

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From ANON - gypsy on October 22, 2006
    yes, it was lovely, could have been more detailed, but good none the less. i like how this has a bit of a plot but its still mostly moments w/ just the 2 of them; u can communicate more than u think in a story that spans only a few short days. y' did extremely well 4 sum1 experimenting w/ a new pairing. -much love- ^___^v
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  • From ANON - cateye on October 19, 2006
    Bella how do you find the time to write all these stories? You are wondreful,I love the way you write.
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on October 18, 2006
    I am so glad you decided to make this another one of your wonderful LONG stories! I can
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2006
    I am so glad you decided to make this another one of your wonderful LONG stories! I can
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  • From ANON - Avanell on October 17, 2006
    Ooh! that was very nice...wish I was Hermione for that one :) Poor ickle ronniekins...just wait till he finds out ;)
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  • From ANON - Jupiter on October 11, 2006
    That was very good, and a suprise to see Hermione as a DE. I can only imagine what Ron would have said if he and Hermy got married, and he saw her Mark. I hope you write more chapters, I'd love to see this story develop.
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on October 09, 2006
    Wow you did it again! You have to develop this wonderful story. I can
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  • From ANON - Avanell on October 09, 2006
    Great job! I thought this might set up for a one-shot, but please to read that it hints at scenes to come. Love the thought of rejected Ron as Hermione gets seduced by Draco. Loved the portrait in his room.
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  • From ANON - Avari20 on October 09, 2006
    Listen-you've really got something going here. It's well, written, and the plot really has potential. There are times, however, that it feels like things are being rushed, like Hermione's feeling for Draco. His own feelings can be explained somewhat by the life sized picture, but so far you've only skimmed the surface. Take your time, explore the deeper issues involved here. He's a Death Eater, just been cursed blind. The average person might be feeling bitter, or scared, or anything like that. She's been forced to be a Death Eater (which, in a way, deserves explaination in itself, given their policies on Kill Any Mudblood in Sight), and I would imagine she would be planning her escape as soon as possible. Again, this fic has great potential. It doesn't have to be super long, but I urge you to take your time with it, and go over it once again before you post.

    Looking forward,
    Avari20
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