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Reviews for His Only Love: Her Only Hate

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From ANON - Lorrain on November 20, 2011
    Why don't you have a beta? Just joking. Please update as soon as you can. I have really enjoyed your stories.
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  • From ANON - Saffron on August 22, 2010
    I understand about the beta thing I got dogged by so many for not having a beta for both of my stories Forsake all others and Escape to
    Love. they are cool. But as you say they take a while but I deal and just keep working on future chapters. Your stories are awesome without a beta keep up the amazing work.
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on December 05, 2006
    Well, if all else fails at least they have Snape, right? Again, another great story. I really enjoy the pairing of Draco and Hermione, which is how I discovered fan fiction in the first place, and because of you I think I may ship Lucius and Hermione too! Your first outting with Draco and Hermione is commendable. He is not as saucy as his father, but it is a refreshing change. I love the part about her photo turning around when he was nude in front of her -- I wonder what it will do now? Also did he have it in his room at the manor or was this something that Snape prepared and hid for him? Again, love it -- you are so talented!
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  • From ANON - cateye on November 14, 2006
    Wormtail has a secert crush on Voldemortde and sleeps with them at night.I hope Harry& Ron don't hitt Draco ,you just don't hitt a blind man!I love Severus,maybe Hermione should just have Draco&Severus at the same time.I think Cissy still wants to be in Dracos life,she just has to fo along with what Lucios says.I think later she will make a stand on her own and be with her son. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on November 13, 2006
    I love that Lucius stayed true to his character instead of quickly accepting Hermione. I like the idea of Draco having to do for himself for the first time. Also his mother could come around and maybe convince Lucius to accept Draco back. She at least looked like she cared.
    Harry and company are going to kill Severus and Hermione for bringing Draco to headquarters. Especially Ron, when he finds out his Hermione loves Draco and gave herself to him. I can
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  • From ANON - skye on November 13, 2006
    *throwing Lemon drops and Chocolate frogs at authour to help feed muse*
    all twisty there in this chappie, Snape seems "good" and Narcissa may end up as a "nice" mum-in-law? Lucius is still a nasty piece of work though!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 10, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - white dragon on October 23, 2006
    Bella
    either we have the same "fibro brain" or my sjogren's is filling in the blanks b/c i haven't ever noticed anything missing. i am addicted to your works and especially loved your your tone when writing. please keep up the stress relief. your stories get me ready to face my PT job in spite of my grocery list of issues, which i KNOW you can identify with.

    thanks again for keeping up the great work for those of up without the muse.

    white dragon
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  • From ANON - vic on October 22, 2006
    I fully understand your oppinion! I also don't have a beta (for my german texts), but I do read for a friend of mine - I've told her a thousand times that her language is not that bad, in my opinion she doesn't need one, but she likes it, so I do that for her. The most peoole who cry for a beta are the ones who make many mistakes by themselves (hypocrits in my opinion). So don't care about them and go on with your wonderfull story (and forgive me my mistakes - english is not my mothertongue, but I do my best).
    love, vic
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 22, 2006
    Ch 1-3 I like this story even though it has OOC tendencies but they seem to flow. Heck, this entire area is OOC. LOL

    You put things into perspective for me today...others have tried but today it sunk in. You are absolutely right...this is your story and if you don't want a beta, that is your perogative. If we don't like your writing, don't read. I do believe I will follow that advice and I will never complain or offer a correction again. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Natyslacks on October 22, 2006
    Okay, I love where this fic is going and I can't wait to read more! Update soon!
    Love Natalie
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 22, 2006
    Very interesting approach and I'm really enjoying it. As for the beta thing I don't think it matters and here's a vote of confidence from me. I typically don't have a beta either. I hope that the story over rides the form. Update soon, can't wait to see what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - cateye on October 22, 2006
    Bella,donot worry about what people say,Ithink your stories are great.I wake up every day looking to see if any as been updated or not do'nt ever giveup!I have Lupis and have had to have back surgery so I kinda know how you feel.Theres one cure for the people who haveproblems with your stories,thay don't have to read them and miss out on something really good.Never give up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2006
    I'm not offended at all! Sorry, it's such a touchy subject with you. I myself have had bad experiences with betas, but sometimes you strike gold. I never said your story was bad. Just that it needed to be developed as it felt rushed. Listen, when you write if you don't get constructive criticism, how do you improve? I've had people call me a bitch and all sorts of really nasty things, and never let it stop me. I don't want to discourage, but let you know that your work has wonderful potential. In college, I always took that as a sign that I needed to work harder at what I did. I am the same way in my worklife and tend to view anything in the same light. That's my particular thing...trying to get more out of everything.

    As for you being sick, I am glad that writing is a comfort to you. Writing should always mean something to the author. By the way, I would NEVER review a story that I felt was truly terrible. They are not worth my time or effort. As I said previously keep writing.

    (I was actually going to offer to beta for you, but I have a feeling our disparate temperaments would be a bad combination.)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2006
    ** THIS IS NOT A FLAME ** You've an interesting plot that needs more development and editing. I really think you need to find a beta. When you put more effort, trust me it shows! The sex scene leaves a lot to be desired. Considering that Malfoy was supposedly in love with her for years, I would think that there would be more tenderness and passion from him. I also don't feel Hermione's capitulation felt genuine. Again, a bit too rushed. Keep writing because practice really does make perfect.
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