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Reviews for Dance With The Devil

By : alissaevans444
  • From Shellnet on September 12, 2019

    I  I ignore a lot but that whole time you keep using you instead of your is to much your belongs to you you're is you are your mother not you mother. you mother is only  appropriate in the case of something like I love you mother  not good with punctuation so I'm not sure what the punctuation between you and mother would be  But  I like it to sound right when I speak the words


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  • From ANON - PhoneixFireSnape on February 24, 2009
    soooooooo.... what happend to severus? lol Great story so far.. but needing to know what happend to sev!!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From thedarklordspet on February 19, 2008
    please please please please update i love the story
    i need to know what happens

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  • From ANON - Sarah Cobb on October 12, 2007
    I love this story is so god please continue please
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 20, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From scotsgirl on March 03, 2007
    What a brilliant story well done keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2007
    ahhh! when is the next update.
    i love tthis story so much i even re-read it two times. :)
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  • From ANON - robyn on January 14, 2007
    its pretty good
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  • From ANON - Ryu on January 13, 2007
    Ah, u like jokes? Heres one: A drunk guy is sitting at the bar when a woman comes in and sits down next to him. She lifts her arm to call the bartender and the guy notices all this hair under her arm like she's never shaved. As the bartender arrives he says " Give the ballarina whatever she wants and I'll pay" Of course the bartender asks " How do you know she's a ballarina?" To which the drunk guy answers " Only a ballarina can pick up her leg that high"
    harhar.yeah I know it's an old one...sorry if you already knew it.
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  • From ANON - Tabi on January 13, 2007
    Well this was a very good chapter I cant wait until the next one. The Weasley's and their vodka..now that is something I would buy. I usually dont have what ppl would call a full hangover..Mine usually hits hours after I have been up with a headache. I really would buy some of theirs. I wonder what this punishment is going to be like. Its nice to see that Mione is warming up to him very nicely...

    Keep up the good work.......

    Until next chapter.......Tabi
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  • From ANON - Ryu on January 12, 2007
    Muhahahaha, I just finished the third chapter and I loved the part where Sev said " I hope to have a enjoyable marriage"( or something to that effect) - he sounded like a air-hostess that useually stands in front with the toothpaste grin and says " We hope you have an enjoyable flight".Just as fake.
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  • From SorceressFujin on January 11, 2007
    Excellent chapter! I hope you update again soon, i cant wait! :D
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  • From ANON - angel on January 11, 2007
    ~lol~ that was awsome i love it and i hope sev will be ok ...i love the joke .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Nasis on January 11, 2007
    A very good story, can't wait for more!
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