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Reviews for Dance With The Devil

By : alissaevans444
  • From ANON - angel on December 15, 2006
    ~lol~ that was great i love it and how sev tryed to get out of the real reson why is was looking in her bags ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2006
    :)
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  • From ANON - Kim on November 25, 2006
    I thought that you did the wedding very nicely. I didn't know how you were going to do the kiss at the end of the wedding. I was thinking that it might have been a bit awkward. Awesome job!
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  • From ANON - Isobela on November 22, 2006
    Fantastic story! I love where it is going. I can't wait til your next update. ~Izzy
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  • From ANON - kristoph on November 22, 2006
    This is a great start, but I do have one thing to say. The children at Hogwarts, as with many other English schools turn 18 in their seventh and final year. In the books, Hermione is one of the eldest of her class, and therefore she would be 18 already a the time of this law, 19 if you count the use of timeturner. Also, this would mean that quite a lot of the people in her year would also get petitions.

    I still want to say that I liked the first chapter, and I love the twist about the second marriage clause. Very slytherin!
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  • From ANON - allie on November 22, 2006
    please update
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  • From shelagh on November 21, 2006
    Great chapter. Hmm now what is going to hapen in Diagon Alley?
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  • From ANON - angel on November 21, 2006
    ~lol~ that was awesome i love it ... and man harry and ron are nosey... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 21, 2006
    well da! who wouldn't have more sex after all that playful banter. i do hope that you will have another chapter for us sooner than you did this one. so really love the way that you have severus' character in this story unlike some who are ether worst or have him way too soft, etc. thanks for the chapter! hope to read more soon!:)
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  • From ANON - Ginger on November 15, 2006
    A very good chapter! I like it, that snape seeks hermiones permission bevor he starts to satisfy his darker urges.
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 14, 2006
    waahoooo!!!! Quite steamy, erotic and um titilating lol. I believe they do compliment each other well. Even though How Severus could murder two women after using them right before his wedding, uggg men such blasted lust filled beasts lol. Awesome story. Rl does get in the way of the creative flow. Glad you updated. Please update agaiun soon.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 14, 2006
    hehe bath time fun .. that was hot .. i love it please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From SorceressFujin on November 14, 2006
    Yummy chapter! :P I am eagerly awaiting the next!
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 14, 2006
    YEAH A NEW CHAPTER!!! you better (please) update sooner and lots more of what you just wrote! :) well they certainly do complament each other really well. update!.....please.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on November 02, 2006
    Lol nearly didn't make it to the bedroom. The nakedness levels comment made me laugh too... loved it.
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