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Reviews for Startling Revelations

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  • From ANON - Moyima on October 16, 2006
    WOW! Great job! Draco's got a really funny way of flirting! Can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - mphoenix on October 16, 2006
    oh i can't wait for more. much more of this.
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  • From ANON - stef on October 16, 2006
    wow! i really like where this story is going! well written although i do have to point out that while there are no actual spelling mistakes, there are grammatical errors and fixing these can only make the story that much easy to read... nothing major just things like 'your' instead of 'you're' in certain places etc... if you would like a helping hand or a beta, feel free to send me an email otherwise well done! keep up the good work!
    stef
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  • From ANON - littlefox on October 16, 2006
    i think this fic is pretty damn good for being your first fic. i hope you keep going with it. i wanna read the rest!
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  • From ANON - PrettySin on October 16, 2006
    Very great start, and exactly how I figured the two of them would get together! Can we say sexual tension? The books and even the movies are full of both. I love your characterizations, though I was sad about the Weasleys who died in the war. Then again... someone had to. Ron's great, and I loved Hermione's reaction. (Though some part of me was hoping she'd come up with a plan for Harry to beat Draco into the wall (er... did I mean that pun? ;) every morning so Ron would eat) I'm eagerly awaiting more. ~Sin
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  • From ANON - L7 on October 16, 2006
    Ohhh that was definitely HOTTTTTTTT please continue because you are doing an awesome job!!!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on October 16, 2006
    oh! i'm excited! you should keep going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2006
    A great start.Please continue
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  • From ANON - L_C on October 15, 2006
    ooooooh very good! nothing better than a fight that turns into a hot kiss!

    look forward to chapter 2
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  • From ANON - tori on October 15, 2006
    Hilarious loved it, making out in front of everyone. Malfoys got to be freaking out now.
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  • From ANON - Lenore on October 15, 2006
    Wow, that was actually really good. I enjoyed that a lot. Keen on wrighting please!
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  • From ANON - ranapuella on October 15, 2006
    wow very good. i liked it and want more :-p
    good job

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2006
    continue! continue! COOONTTIIINNNUEEE! :D
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  • From ANON - kablam on October 15, 2006
    aww i love it
    update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Bouvais on October 15, 2006
    Great job so far. Can't wait to read more.
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