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Reviews for In sickness and in health

By : naginisnake
  • From purefaith91 on March 12, 2011
    What an excellent and original story. You wasted no time or words in the telling of your story. Love the ending and that Hermione took out Lucius on the battlefield. Very enjoyable read (even through the tears at the end). Thanks for sharing. p
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  • From naginisnake on February 24, 2007
    keep the reviews coming please
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2006
    Loved it~!
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  • From ANON - naginisnake on December 29, 2006
    glad to see more reviews it makes me happy happy happy :)
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  • From ANON - Morte DeVin on October 30, 2006
    That was adorable, i really like the ending, very well written
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  • From ANON - angel on October 29, 2006
    ~sniff sniff~ that was great i love it but it was sad at the end .. im glad the named him harry .. i cant wait in till your next story .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Avanell on October 29, 2006
    When did you start posting this? It was marked that I had looked at it, but I didn't really remember anything. Loved the whole thing! Can't wait for the battle and Hermione and Draco's first night together. And for Ron and Harry to meet the twins. James naming will likely make Harry cry for joy. Or be honored.
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  • From naginisnake on October 29, 2006
    hey i am loving the fact that you guys keep reviewing. It helps me keep going
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on October 28, 2006
    Please continue this story! Half the time I was laughing my rear off, the other time I was weeping along with Hermione... or getting surprised along w/ Draco! Keep up the fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 28, 2006
    aww they are a cute family.... heheh i love what snape said .. hmm i wonder what mione's plan is .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - angel on October 16, 2006
    aww that was great i love mione wake up call .. im glad draco is there fro her and i just wonder who is that father of mione twins ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - LupinsLady on October 16, 2006
    Brilliant, who will the baby look like? Please let it be Draco. Awesome story!!! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ShadowandFlamePanther on October 16, 2006
    Hey

    This story has potiental but the way it is written sort of makes it hard to read.

    There are some names and words not captialized in other places where they are. Example, Hermione's name being captilized, example hermione and her mother screamed simultaniously as John Granger hit the floor dead. Hermione held her mother back from running to him.

    You don't seperate the talking from the rest of the story. "Mum it's too late he's gone." Her mother collapsed crying. Five death eaters flooded into the room with wicked grins on their faces.

    It should be

    "Mum it's too late he's gone."

    Her mother collapsed crying. Five death eaters flooded into the room with wicked grins on their faces.

    I think you would benifit from a beta reader. Once someone goes in and takes care of your mistakes in spelling and things, a lot more people would read and review.

    Also.. You might want to place a disclaimer at the first chapter of your story. In all six chapters it isn't written once and AFF has been cracking down on the stories.

    This isn't a flame, just some advice from one author to the next. Good luck in the future and if you want to respond or have questions, Email me.


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  • From ANON - angel on October 15, 2006
    wow she is a morphi cool .. and she has to give him point that he is trying to make sure she is ok and that she does not work her self to the bone ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - angel on October 15, 2006
    ~sniff sniff~ poor mione ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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