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Reviews for The War of the Tainted Blood

By : DawnsEarlyLight
  • From vonHardenberg on November 21, 2010
    Dearest,

    Please see: http://www.elearnenglishlanguage.com/difficulties/totootwo.html
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 23, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From vonHardenberg on June 20, 2007
    Good story, but you do need a beta.

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  • From ANON - sinbad on April 17, 2007
    Well, everyone seems to be hot and bothered. I think Hermione should give Severus a run for the money just for the entertainment value. I'm enjoying this story very much and hope for frequent updates.
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  • From Sampdoria on April 17, 2007
    So glad to see an update to this story! Poor Hermione, life is going really downhill for her, thats for sure. Severus deserved the words she told him, he might have rejected the woman after Hermione left, but he was very chummy with her when Hermione found them, she has all reason to be mad at him, especially after the words they had at the headmasters office about her fidelity. I hope you will find some happiness for her.
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  • From ANON - Emmylovedraco on January 10, 2007
    Can you please update this story too please,
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 29, 2006
    ohhh my goodness. Now the negotiations begin and lol. Severus' grandfather omg he saud the f word. That was funny. and thats just crazy deciding when they will and how much they will and all that. I can see discussing children but lol I guess so she cant deny him the chance to have children. hehe He's man so he should be like any male. and I am glad Severus seems to be thinking things through. Good chappie. Funny. Lol more more more please. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - purrfus on November 29, 2006
    ch 11 - Intriguing. I'm having a little trouble believing the scene where Hermione and Sev discuss sex, and she blurts out her attraction - not sure if its the situation or the dialog I'm having trouble with.

    I am looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 29, 2006
    Ohhh I love it another chappie. Lol already a test of wills there. Poor Severus and Hermione they are in for quite a ride as stubborn as those two are. I see Severus won though. lol Good chappie. Cant wait for more. Please ohh please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Emmylovedraco on November 28, 2006
    Thank you, For the update I hope see more soon this is to good I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Emmylovedraco on November 28, 2006
    Nooooooooo' you can't stop now please more ch Soon, I like this story so much.
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  • From ANON - Sampdoria on November 28, 2006
    So glad to see a new chapter. I like your story, always great with a new twist to the stories about my favourite couple:-)) Let more chapters come soon:-)))
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 28, 2006
    Yay!!!! an update. I really liked this story and was hoping you would update. I wanna see what happens next. hehehe possible lemons ahead soon? anyways welcome back. and more more more please. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on November 28, 2006
    Interesting story. Different, for sure. A couple of parts made me bark with laughter though. The first being Severus Reynaldo Snape hahahahhaha which should win an award for being the funniest middle name I've ever seen Snape given. And I've seen tons. It's not the name Reynaldo that's funny, but when you wedge it between Severus and Snape, it's hysterical.

    Then there was Snape being perfectly in character until he suddenly busts out with the ever american, "Does that gross you out?" He asked softly. It was cute though.

    I know this is going to seem mean but it's not meant that way. Rarely do fic writers get it absolutely perfect, so it's no big deal. The story is interesting anyway, and that's all that matters.
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