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By : KimothytheSage
  • From storylistener on November 02, 2008
    You want some suggestions? Okay, here's a couple. Next time use toys! A dildo, a butt plug, nipple clamps, That neat electric thing found in this story: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600015323 , vibrators (either in the anus or on the cock ring) the thing you stick up the pee slit (bonus if it vibrates), cock ring again, little round things that lick like mouths when you put them somewhere! Maybe some food play, like covering Harry in choclate. Wax and Ice, makes a nice contrast. Edible body paint. A potion to over stimulate Harry's nerves making everything more intense. Kitty Ears, makes Harry even cuter! He's a lover to a potions Master, use that! That's all I can think of off the top of my head. Can you tell I've read too many fics on this site? Wonderful Job so far, when you write more, please email me at storylistener@earthlink.net Hope I helped. Thanks!
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  • From Hambares on August 13, 2008
    I just found this story! It was so darn kinky. I love Harry and his ability to take both men! It would be fun to see him in other situations: maybe out to eat naked with a glamour that makes him appear clothed. Harry would like that, especially if Draco and Severus could see him as he truly was.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2008
    a full out bondage session would be nice, whips chains suspension, even role playiing student teacher type thing

    gods i love sub harry dom sev
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  • From Makovaso on January 17, 2008
    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lils on October 17, 2007
    "causing Harry and Draco to scream and cum down each others throats."

    you forgot the cock ring ;)

    Love yur story
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  • From slytherinharry on September 02, 2007
    hey u make it a mpreg.i know for sure u would do good writing as i am bliis ully grinning like the cat who got the cream after reading these three chapters please continue or else i woud ed up bawling like an idiot because of u.

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  • From ANON - bobbie on September 02, 2007
    ok, you asked for it,,have them both inside harry,at the same time,,,then have one or both use a engorgement spell,,making them swell more,,but slowly..as they start to cum, have them become magicly bonded...this is good so far, keep up the good work
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  • From darknightfire on August 30, 2007
    Maybe you can make a fic between Harry Potter and a YYHakusho - a slash of Hiei/Harry ..... this is my opinion.......
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  • From Alleya on August 29, 2007
    awesome so far. I have tons of good ideas. You can have the three of them having sex in public, water sports (if you know what i mean), having some beach fun (going to a nude beach perhaps), pools are fun too. Oh you can have someone trying to check out harry in a club and and Draco and Sev get jealous. Ah another good idea is Harry being watched while he 'serviced' Draco and Sev. Favorite, have harry dress like a lolita girl wearing a frilly dress or a girl's uniform while his Professor Draco and Professor Severus punish hive for indecient exposure. Anyway that's a few ideas. If you need more than just let me know.
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  • From pretender on August 29, 2007
    Harry could be disaplined for not following orders or doing something not allowed
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2007
    Nice. That was hot.
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  • From NightLo on August 04, 2007
    Well, this is really hot and delicious~~~~ thanks for this!!!
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  • From Chandrima on July 30, 2007
    He looked at them to see what the hold up was and found them playing Rock Paper Scissors. "Excuse me but what the fuck are you doing?"
    They looked at him and blushed, "We can't decide who should penetrate you first. So we decided to do it the manly way. Best two out of three."


    That has got to be THE best thing I've ever read. Ever. And the whole "I feel like we live in a porno," bit too. God, just soooo good!
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  • From toads70 on July 30, 2007
    lol that was great
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  • From Makovaso on March 30, 2007
    Please next chapter!!!
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