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Reviews for The Truth About Harry and Hermione

By : DLMAKnight

From nonentity on December 16, 2007
The premise is interesting and I like that you try to mix it up by switching back and forth from letters to dialog to dictation. Almost all of the lines pertain to plot info though, or repeating plot info. I think it'd help if you add more lines and incidents that don't do anything but illustrate the characters or personalities of the people? Maybe do a section on Severus before going back to them fetching Harry? All the exposition seems to be dragging the story down a bit?
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From ANON - Shardae on November 12, 2006
Add soon...
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From redheadfaerie on October 28, 2006
I really like this story, but its comfusing posting the chapters in parts. it makes more sense to the reader to just wait till the whole thing is done before posting. but its a fantastic concept and i cant wait to see where youre going with it!
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From ANON - Alo on October 28, 2006
Another excellent chapter, just wish they were a we bit longer. Update soon.
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From ANON - LadyNiteRaven on October 26, 2006
This is an excellent story line. I can't wait to read the rest of it. More please. I hope you don't get picked for jury Duty!
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From ANON - lisa on October 26, 2006
yay an update. this is most interesting.hope to see more. omg Severus is going to be floored when he finds out Hermione is his daughter and hopefully he'll be eating some humble pie especially after how mean he's been to her.lol can't wait to see who Harry belongs to too. now you got me hanging lol oh well. Update soon please. goodluck with jury duty.
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From ANON - ALo on October 25, 2006
Hope this dosn't mean your removing the story because you really have me interested in how this goes pleas continue.
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From ANON - Sampdoria on October 22, 2006
Please, please say you will update soon, I would love to get the rest of this story. It is always great to find a completly new twist to a fanfiction, and this one seems to have the possibility to be a great one:-)
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From ANON - angel on October 21, 2006
wow .. that told us a lot more about them ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - Mr. Flibble on October 20, 2006
Oh how i love and hate cliffies.

i hope theres an update soon.
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From ANON - Kratos on October 20, 2006
A Good start I look forward to what you come up with next. But please make this a Harry and Hermione getting together story.

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From ANON - lisa on October 20, 2006
Omg No way! Lol . I cannot believe it Hermione a Snape. wow. Love it so far. even though I prefer my Severus and Hermione pairing. My interests are piqued. more please. Update soon Please. good start so far. and lol I love sweet Harry. goodluck.
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From ANON - Lyssa on October 19, 2006
this is sweet....write more
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From ANON - angel on October 19, 2006
wow that was great ... so she is snape daughter.. wow please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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