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By : Marti
  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2007
    That was a wonderful story. I hope you do a part 2

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  • From ANON - hp4freek on November 22, 2006
    I wanted to tell you how fabulous I found this! I laughed, I cried, I did both at the same time! Great job!!
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on November 19, 2006
    That was a very sweet ending! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2006
    excellent job, and I liked the sibling jealously thing - very realistic. my own niece asked if she could have our old baby since we where having a new one!
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  • From ANON - Beck on November 12, 2006
    Ohhhh what a sweet ending. Do a sequel it would be good to see the family grow up and that. Great Story loved it!
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  • From ANON - Barbara on November 12, 2006
    Sad it had to end but laughed about the kittens. I can relate as I did the same thing as a small child but it was my hamster and watched her have babies and freaked.
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 12, 2006
    okay you are forgiven to some extent, it was a very great chapter and i do love the way it ended-BUT i really hated the gap. C'est la vie! well i do love the way it showed the feelings and the best part was "there rats, daddy!" too funny! well i do hope that you make a sequel someday soon, thought i do understand wanting or needing a break! be reading ya!:)
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  • From juls on November 12, 2006
    Beautiful ending. Ahhhh romance. And rats...(sorry!)
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 12, 2006
    Awwww!!! That was perfect. Just perfect. Lol Tristyn was something, just like her daddy. Awesome ending to an awesome story. Thanks so much for the mention. I hate to see it end but it was just perfect. Goodluck with the rest and perhaps you will do a sequel. Love your stories. Keep on writing, I'll keep reading lol.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 11, 2006
    that was an awesome endding i love it .. and how tristyn actted there at the end ... man that was great .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - skydancer on November 11, 2006
    oh wow.... I soooo wanted to leave a profound, respectful, inteligent review.... and then Rover had rats! lol....Loved Severus' reaction to that! you did an amazing job with this story and you deserve all the wonderful chocolate frogs you can eat! skye
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on November 11, 2006
    Beautiful!!! Simply beautiful!!! It was such a good ending, but I'm incredibly sad it's over!!! A sequel would be so great if you ever have time. Looking forward to more stories from you! Happy writing on whatever takes your fancy!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Hugs and kisses,
    Killer K
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 11, 2006
    Epilogue - Wonderful story! I enjoyed every chapter of it. LOL Tristyn is definitely an attention grabber. I rather enjoyed her.
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  • From ANON - Beck on November 11, 2006
    wow great story that is nearly to an end *sniffs* but its great to see hermione back and healthy again.. sorry i havn't reviewed in ages i have been busy with exams and assignments....update soon please
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  • From LoverofDarkness on November 10, 2006
    It is perfect.
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