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By : Marti
  • From ANON - lisa on November 10, 2006
    Awwww!!!! That was such a nice homecoming and I am so glad they are together again. Maybe finally they can be a family and Severus can be happy. and Tristyn finally has a mummy. so sweet. I reallly loved this story. Can't wait for the epilouge, Please update it soon.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on November 10, 2006
    the little girl is sooo cute!!!! i love this fic please finish it. I hope your little one is doing better, what with all the hospital stays. Those are never fun. :(
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  • From juls on November 09, 2006
    Ok, dunno if I reviewed this one yet or not, but wanted to say I loved this chapter. I'm glad Hermione is getting back to her life now. huggles juls
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  • From ANON - Ava Allen on November 09, 2006
    Nooo...please, don`t write the epiloque yet !!! I love stories, where they are married and have children. And you did very good job when you created this little girl. I love her questions : "How'd I get in my mummy's tummy?" :-)))
    Please... write more..maybe sequel ???

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  • From ANON - angel on November 09, 2006
    ~giggles~ that was awesome ... i love it i cant wait in till the next chapter .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Barbara on November 09, 2006
    Going to miss this story, it was great. Missed reading for 2 days and came home to 4 new chapters.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 09, 2006
    i cant believe its almost over its such a good story
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 09, 2006
    oooohhhh! that was so cute and precious that i could just die! bytheway if you skip a lot in the next chapter/eplicelog i will be killing you instead. by this i mean no six year gap with tristyn going to hogwart no nine months later everyone waiting in the hospital etc. so now have a nice ending (with even a hint of a possible sequel would be even better!;))!
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 09, 2006
    Awwww!!!!! Yay!!!!! thanks for them lemons. Loved them. That was so nice. A bit rushed but nice. I do love them together. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Joani on November 09, 2006
    Yay, update again! ~Joani
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 09, 2006
    that was sepectular and i am glad that it was longer and more detailed than you thaught it would be it made it all the better for it! i don't want it to end ether but if you do end it that soon please, please, PLEASE make it as long or longer and just as detailed as the last chapter then i will be happy or at least content. :)
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  • From ANON - angel on November 08, 2006
    wow that was wow ... im glad they took that step .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - juls on November 08, 2006
    That was a wonderful chapter, a lemon like doesn't pucker but is sweet and hot. Keep up the good work =)
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on November 08, 2006
    Oh my gosh! Brilliant!!! Such a wonderful story!!! It is so refreshing to read a story with such great emotional substance! I heartily applaud you!!! I admit I am guilty of often reading the lemon filled variety, so this story has been just fantastic!!! Not that I won't love the up coming lemons you've promised!!!lol I'm just kinda speechless... I really dread this wonderful work ending! I hope you can find the time to write another. You have such talent!!! I really appreciate the time you sacrifice to bring me a little ecscape from real life. I suspect it's a bit of an escape for you as well! Again, A marvelous job you are doing and can't wait for an update!!! Happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Hugs,
    Killer K :D
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 08, 2006
    Awwww omg she's home and Severus and Tristyn have her back. that was soooo sweet and heart wrenching. Severus acts like he truly loves her. And he's such a good father. and lil tristyn is so cute. I cant help but think Hermione will fall in love with her daughter quickly and realize what she has and not let it go. good chappies. more more more please update soon please.
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