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By : Marti
  • From ANON - Brighton on November 06, 2006
    Great story thus far, and Tristyn is incredibly cute. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 06, 2006
    Awwww that chappie was so sweet and sad at the same time. I am glad Albus knows where Hermione is at. and hopefully she will recover soon. I cannot imagine what she's been through and she's missed out on so much of her daughter's lifer. Perhaps Severus can use a pensieve to catch her up but still it is not like being there. It is all a big mess. I hope they truly heal and find happiness. Love the story. more more more please. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on November 06, 2006
    Great story!! can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Barbara on November 06, 2006
    Such a great update and I really hope that one day Severus and the complete family can be reunited.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 06, 2006
    wow that was great .. i love how she want to albus to get to come to the ball .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - angel on November 05, 2006
    wow .. she was goyle's elf .... man im thye got her back ok ... please please please please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more ...later for now

    angel
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  • From LoverofDarkness on November 05, 2006
    Please update!
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 05, 2006
    Omg Hermione needs serious therapy! and her daughter her poor daughter without a mother. where the heck is she? bad bad bad Hermione. I jut cant believe shed do that. I can believe shed kill herself or something but abadonong a baby no. so where is she now? I hope things work out. and she gets help fast for Severus and tristyns sake.
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 05, 2006
    That rat deserved a quick Avada. For that matter, so did the betraying house elf. Where are you going from here?

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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 05, 2006
    omg write more i just cant wait to see what happens next

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  • From ANON - Barbara on November 05, 2006
    Great action packed update!!!!
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  • From ANON - Joani on November 05, 2006
    I loved the update, update again soon! ~Joani
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2006
    I love this story and I can't wait for another update :-) You mentioned you have a child in the hospital. I do hope everything is ok.
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  • From ANON - Beck on November 03, 2006
    Hey,

    Oh what is the house elf doing gah! lol Update soon please
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  • From ANON - angel on November 02, 2006
    ohh noo maaki is the dark lords elf .. man now what are they going to do .. dopey should do something to stop her .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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