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By : Marti
  • From ANON - Dork Fish on October 28, 2006
    This is a really fabulous story! I applaud you for writing a poignant, heart-wrenching story when so many are based purely on sexual interludes between characters. I am enjoying your creation immensely - as much as one can enjoy such saddness!lol Keep up the great job!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 28, 2006
    man .. well i hope they find out that is harry's wand and get it back to him .... i hope she gets the help she needs soon .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - bobbie on October 28, 2006
    ok, this is an ok story so far,,,i wish you could make Hermione wake up and smell the coffee...lol..she needs to realize Snape actually saved her life,,the least she could do is give him and her daughter a chance,,they need her more then she realizes..
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  • From ANON - angel on October 28, 2006
    man ..mione has lost it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - angel on October 26, 2006
    wow that was great .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Barbara on October 26, 2006
    Great update, and I love that Severus wants to be a hands on dad especially after everything with Hermione. I really hope she gets the help and will want to become family with Severus and the baby.
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  • From ANON - sunshyne on October 26, 2006
    I like where you are taking this, more please!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 25, 2006
    awww sev is a softy when is comes to his little girl .. heheh sev shocked harry with is nice words .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. i hope your son feels better soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Joani on October 25, 2006
    I love the story, but i hope Hermione gets over this and realizes that Severus does care about her.
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  • From ANON - Rose Evans on October 25, 2006
    I love the story please keep updating. I hope your little guy gets better soon. Make sure to pack his teddy,a cupple of toys and a blanket from home. Trust me on this I work at a hospital.
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  • From ANON - Kathryn on October 25, 2006
    Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying your story and I wish you and your family well.
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  • From ANON - septentrion on October 25, 2006
    my best wishes for your little one. He (or she) is more important than updates.
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  • From ANON - mekareami on October 24, 2006
    I have enjoyed your story so far and I hope your son recovers quickly with no complications. Thank you for writing and I look forward to your next update
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  • From ANON - Kris on October 24, 2006
    Ever since you talked about "I've only cried in the headmasters presence twice" that has been coming back to me everytime im reading this. Would like to see Severus have an emotional breakdown (in front of Hermione), to show that he is soooooooooo sorry. Or a pensieve. But hey, im not writing this and I dont read your notes. I should probably do that XD Cant wait for more chapters of course! =P
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