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By : Marti

From ANON - angel on October 24, 2006
man ... i cant wait in till your next update ...please soon .. later for now

angel
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From ANON - angel on October 24, 2006
~sniff sniff~ poor mione ,sev snd tristyn.... i hope mione dose get better soon and see the she has a beautifully baby girl at home that needs her ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - naya on October 23, 2006
I look forward to your return, and wish your son well.

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From ANON - Kris on October 23, 2006
More more more! =D
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From ANON - Barbara on October 23, 2006
Great story. What did Dumbledore mean when he was telling Severus that heSeverus) knew from experience and not to have Hermione descend into darkness like he did???
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From ANON - cateye on October 23, 2006
Thi is starting out to be a very good story,you've put alot of thought in ot so far and have really got Hermione going through all the thoughts and fellings of having a bad experience.I just hope Harry and Ron keep playing nice. I can't wait for more!
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From ANON - abtya on October 23, 2006
An interesting plot. Very good characterization and interactions. I hope you continue. My only criticism, is that you could use a beta for structure.
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From ANON - angel on October 23, 2006
wow that was great .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - Red Writing Hood on October 22, 2006
This seems to be the start of a good story, but it's very difficult to read. You really need to go in and edit the paragraphs. It reads like a poem structure. The sentences need to connect with the previous ones. Any way...its a good start.

Red

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From ANON - Akasha on October 22, 2006
interesting....very interesting. id like to see where this goes! please keep on keepin on!
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From ANON - cat on October 22, 2006
I like the start, but could you please change the format, it is diffcult to read. Other than that I like it, it would be nice to get a bit more background on the situation but keep it up.
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