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By : Marti
  • From ANON - hermioneSNAPEfan1983 on March 24, 2014
    since they somewhat know where she is why dont the order and the light side go to America and try and find her and and bring hermione back to England??
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  • From Dimplz on January 10, 2014
    I have to say I enjoyed this story.

    I liked how it was pretty dark, it wasn't all sunshine and roses. There is a similar popular SS/HG story where something similar happens to her but she doesn't remember and they fall in love. However, sometime later in that story, she does finally remember but everything is still okay? The whole ordeal was just brushed off. I liked your approach much better as it is much more realistic. What happened to her, she was not okay with. She struggled with what happened to her for quite some time but she got help and is starting to heal. I also like Snape's character here. We see a side of Snape that is not generally written about. I really enjoyed how he sighed because he was no longer a menacing figure, as much as he still wanted to be! Thanks for writing.
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  • From LadyFreak on March 09, 2012
    wasn;t so sure about this when i read the description, but i must say you did a wonderful job. Turning something so dark and traumatic into a beautiful story. Fantastic. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - jenF on February 19, 2008
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    Hi Marti, wow, what a great story line. All too often Hermione is raped and "gets over it" in 5 seconds flat, and those who have been raped know it's not a 5 second process! You dealt with this subject so incredibly well. Trystan was gorgeous! And the "new arrival" angst for her was just as it is for many kids. Well done!
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  • From ANON - Livvy6 on February 13, 2008
    I loved this story. It was so real. It brought back a lot of sad memories for me. A week after my daughter was born I was hospitalized with PPPD. I could not be near my daughter without having a panic attack. It was horrible, I didn't want her, I felt I was going to be a terrible mother and she would be better off if I left or died. My husband was so good to me and took care of our daughter, loving her when I couldn't. Now she's a Mommy's girl. She's 2 1/2 years old and I still struggle with clinical depression and at times still want to run away. I could completely understand the emotions Hermione was feeling. I believe my depression was triggered from being raped when I was a virgin at 23. I got pregnant and had a miscarriage. I never saw a doctor, I was living in another country and had no support or medical assistance with my miscarriage. I'm just so grateful that I have a loving husband who treats me like a Queen and adores me and is patient like Severus was with Hermione. That was so well-written. It's important to give survivors some of the control back.
    Thank you for writing a very tender and emotional story with a strong ending.
    Livvy
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  • From Alexandra21 on October 13, 2007
    Aaaaw! That was a great ending!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 26, 2007
    I really like this story lot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Sweetie on June 18, 2007
    It was a great story, one of the best on the website. I can appreciate the breath of fresh air from the usual PWPs on here. I was so engrossed in the story i read it non-stop. Keep up the excellence and i'll be sure to read the sequel if and when you make it.
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  • From firewall on June 15, 2007
    Nicely done. I enjoyed this story tremendously. Severus has such a rounded personality here. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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  • From ANON - Katie on June 13, 2007
    Love it!! great story!!! THANX
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  • From vonHardenberg on April 10, 2007
    Dear Marti, This story is outstanding. It is better than D Steele or N Roberts bodice rippers.You are good and that is before the lemons.
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  • From DB1 on March 24, 2007
    Wow great story I loved it!!!

    *DB*
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  • From gitana on March 23, 2007
    After more than three hours of reading your story all I have to say is one thing.... HELL YES!
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  • From Stormi on March 22, 2007
    Great story! Looking forward to your next.
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