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By : BitterWind

From ANON - Leonora on November 02, 2006
What's up with you people? (Some of you, anyway)

Creamy tasty shit: I think I've seen your review before among the reviews for some other story, either some jerk - who has nothing better to do - has copied it, or you make no sense at all.

Boondock Saint: This is supposed to be a site for the open-minded, and there's supposed to be room for all kinds of stories. If you don't like a subject/character/ship, simply don't read the story. Not everyone has the same oppinion as you, and some people enjoy reading Hermione/Ron stories. The review board is for the people who actually read the story, and has something to say about it's contents.

To the author: Don't listen to these fools, your story is great! Keep up the good work.
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From ANON - Ron is gay! on October 30, 2006
> transforming the once simplistic country cottage into an object of magic and mystery.

The burrow a simplistic country cottage? Are you dumb? Have you even read the book?

> Everyone had agreed that the were close enough friends with Ron to be considered family.

So now, that they are "family", you get Ron and Hermione together to fuck? Like brother and sister? This is sick!

> Every single space imaginable was filled with a snoring Weasley.

Yes, they are a huge family, but this is huge hyperbole!

> Uncle JoeJigger was even sleeping in the bathtub.

ROFL. An Oscar (tm) to you for the shittiest name in the universe ever.

> Fairly light, but the night was unexpectedly warm.

Ahhmm ... isn't it summer? It is expected to be warm in the summer! Are you dumb?

> obscured by low lying branches of the giant oaks.

Have you ever seen giant oaks? There are no low lying branches. ROFL! How old are you? Twelve?

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From ANON - Steve Irvin R.I.P. on October 30, 2006
Hi! This story is not sooooooo bad. I would give you 4 out of 10 points. The characters are OOC. The setting is old. This story is not inventive. It's PWP but not of the finest kind. Go and read more good stories (not on this site, because here is mostly shit). Maybe you can learn to make it better the next time.

Greetings
Steve Irvin R.I.P.
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From ANON - Creamy tasty shit on October 30, 2006
Yeah! I love that shit. Pleaze let Ron bugger Harry up his arse and then let Harry lick his own shit from Rons dick. And then maybe Hermione can shit on the two boys and then they can all eat that creamy shit together. Harry then should put his foot really deep up Hermiones arse, so that he is not fisting her, but footing her. Maybe even Harrys foot and Rons dick the same time up Hermiones arse. I really thing that Ron is a foot fetishist and would cum really hard on Harrys foot up in Hermiones arse. Yeah. I love your story. It's so fucking incredible. The best fucking story I've ever ever read. I've never read a better story. Maybe it is because it is the first one that I ever read, but I think I will never read a better story too. To be sure, I will never read another story again. This is so incredible. So fucking incredible. I love that shit really hard. Please write more of that shit. Please put Ron's creamy shitty dick up Harrys mouth, after it was up his arse. And than let Ron go to Hermione to fist her up her tight little fucking cunt. It's a shame that Seamus got her first. Because I would have loved it, if Hermione were a virgin and bleeding like a cut of pig. Harry could have licked that warm and tasty virgin blood. But maybe you can make her bleeding from her monthly bleeding. Harry could lick it and taste it. That creamy blood. He could smear it all over Ron's body and then up his arse. And than maybe draco could stumble about them too. He could come with his broomstick (pun intended) and put that thing up Harrys and Ron's and Hermione's arse and then lick their shit. I think Draco would love to lick their shit, as he really is a shit fetishist. Why would he be with Crabbe and Goyle, if not for that? Maybe even get Hagrid to the quidditch pitch. I thing the half-giant would love to bugger the three guys with his huge half-giant cock. Yeah. What a incredible fucking good tasting story. But ... there are always some golden showers. I thing Ron should pee up to hagrids mouth. As I thing that Hagrid is a pee fetishist. Buckbeak could also make an appearance and could be buggered by Hagrid. And I would love to read about Macgannagol in her cat form and her and Hagrid together. She would be so tight for him and his half-giant cock. Imagine. Macgannagol in cat form. She is so small. So sweet. I think Draco could not be stoped to bugger her up her cat arse to. But don't forget to include filch. He is the cat fetishist and would love to fuck Macgannagol up her arse. Hagrid than could lick that shit from Filchs dick. I would love to see that happen. Yeah, I love your fucking story. It is so incredible good. Best shit I have ever read. I love such shit storys. Shit in storys is always good. And your story has a lot of that. But it could have so much more of that shit. It's easy to write. I thing my suggestions are really good for your story. Maybe we could co-write it together. I can give you so much ideas about shit in storys, that is even better than your shit in this story. Yeah. Dude ... no ... thats not right. You are girls, right? Yeah, girls. I love your shit. Maybe even some action with the giant squid. That would be really awesome. Norbert could come back to. Than you have even dragon shit in your story. As Hagrid is a fucking Dragon fetishist, he would love to bugger Norbert up that giant arse. Hagrid could swimm in dragon shit. He would love it. I would love it. And I know, that you would love to write that too. This story is so hot already. It makes me wanna cum over my keyboard. Oh ... yeah. Shit. Now i have to stop writing this shit, because my keyboard is all slimy. But I don't want to stop. There are so much more ideas up my arse. no. thats not right. It is up my brain. So much more ideas. What do you thing about some action with inferys and maybe even with dumbledore as an infery. Yeah. Macgannagol and Dumbledore. So much shit is possible. I would love to see dumbledore as an infery as he is licking some blood from Macgannagol's creamy and tasty pussy. That could be so good. That would be so good. I would pay you some cents to write that shit for my. I'm not so good with writing. I know, that you are not so much better, but better is better and you could write that creamy shit much better than I. But I love to give you even more ideas. There is so much more shit up my arse. No... up my brain. I want to put it all out on you so that you can write more of this tasty bloody shit. I want to lick that shit. It's all in the imagination. Yeah. I love it, dude. Girls. This shit is so creamy and tasty. I love it. There is no other word for that as love. This is so good. Creamy shit. Gimme more of that. And please some monthly bleeding of Draco. No. Hermione is the girl in this story. But ... this is the best idea ever. Make Draco mpreged by Hagrid. That would be fucking awesome. Best idea ever. A shit covered baby up in dracos arse with Hagrid as the father and Draco as a mother. What a awesome shit. I love it. My ideas are so bubbly in my head. They have to get out, so you can write about them. Maybe Ron can get mpreged by Dumbledore. I think that would be really awesome. And than Ron is licking the shit of Dumbledores dick, which was up that dragon arse. Awesome. I love it. We are such a good team. You gave me such a good sudden inspirations with your story. It is awesome. Just awesome. We are a good team. My ideas and you are writing them down. Yeah. I love it. Maybe a crossover would be good too. If read about a german schei
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From ANON - talley on October 29, 2006
Wow. I just read some of your other reviews. Not nice people. This site has so many Harry/Draco and Snape/Hermione stories I get quite tired of coming here. But then once in awhile there will be a story with Ron as a main character whether it's with Harry or very rarely with Draco (my personal favorite of all slashes). I'm not just into slash though; I like a good Hermonine or Luna or Pansy ship with Ron too. Don't be discourage by rude people.
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From ANON - talley on October 29, 2006
Interesting. Leading to the big event seemed quick, but I like how Ron's nervous. Hope you aren't done.
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From ANON - TiffANY on October 29, 2006
This is a really cute and sexy story :)

PLEASE continue I can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - TiffANY on October 29, 2006
This is a really cute and sexy story :)

PLEASE continue I can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - Boondock Saint on October 29, 2006
Good god. Now we are getting Ron/Hermione stories here too. Oh please my lord, don't make it real. I can't stand it. I want more harmony and not this shit ... ahhh chocolate stuff. Please my lord. Please delete this story. Please kill the author. Please. Please do it. I will always love you. I will do everything you want ... you want me to kill the author? Yes. I can do that. Yes, I will do that. I will kill the author.

@ Author: Please send me your address, so that I can find and kill you, like my lord has commanded, for writing Ron/Hermione stories. They are evil together. Harry and Hermione forever!
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