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Reviews for What a present!

By : Chrliii
  • From Annecia89 on January 29, 2015
    Awww! Very sweet!
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  • From Seph7 on February 04, 2007
    It was very OOC, but I do so love soppy stories!!! Bravo!
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  • From AngelikRebel on November 14, 2006
    AWWWWW!!! That was so cute!!!!!!
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  • From SilverPhantom on November 05, 2006
    I only noticed very little mistakes, one or two grammar mistakes when dealing with past or present tense, but otherwise everything seemed fine. Keep up the writing!
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  • From ANON - Anguloce on November 02, 2006
    yeah snape is a bit ooc, but this is still sweet and made me smile.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on October 29, 2006
    Yeppers! That is one great present! Harry all wrapped ... errr, unwrapped!
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  • From ANON - yiota on October 28, 2006
    So I'm playing a game and reading this at the same time, but I keep getting stuck on "sprayed his tights"
    I'm guessing you meant spread his thighs, but when you're trying to multi-task, sprayed his tights is as far as you get.
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  • From ANON - Aislinn Nicole on October 28, 2006
    Wow! Your first Snarry, huh? You did a fabulous job! The plot was good, and though both characters were a little OOC, it's really hard to write Snarry without them being OOC. I did notice a few spelling mistakes, but since English isn't your first language you did very well! If you plan on writing more, I'd recommend a beta just because it's always helpful to have someone double checking your work for you. I'd love to be your beta, but there are also tons of others out there if you want to look more.

    Thanks for the great fic! I hope you plan on writing more!
    ~Aislinn Nicole
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