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By : Lucie
  • From xxlovemepleasexx on February 02, 2008
    i don't ususally review in the middle of a completed story, but i needed to so i wouldn't forget my comment :D. . .

    i love the story. the emotion in it is amazing. at the moment. . .the piercings really confused me, (just because i was never really sure how many and where they all were. . .)& the language, particularly chapter 19 was very indecisive. sometimes harry suddenly could pronounce english words better, then a few sentences later it was complete crap again (though that may have ended up being a character choice and a bit of a set up).

    thanks a bunch for the great story!
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  • From ANON - evalhanne on December 27, 2007
    Another awesome story! I really liked how the Death Eaters were all turned into toddlers. That was a nice touch. This was such a different story that what I imangined. I really liked how you took real historical figures and incorporated them into your stories. And I really like how you keep up with your stories. THere are so many that I like, but it's been a year or more since they updated and I lost interest in the story. Thank You for the timely updates.
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  • From PrettyMassacre on December 26, 2007
    I loved every single second of this story. The ending was so cute and Im glad it was a happy one
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 21, 2007
    I spent last night and today reading your story and just absolutely love your Farid. I went back to see if you had anything more on Farid and Severus, and then realized that you were the author of Dearest Harry. (I must admit, I never look at the names of the author when going to read a fic) and I must say, this story is just as brilliant, if not more so than Dearest Harry. I just love your writing, and get lost in it for days on end at times. I know you'll have me thinking about a foreign language speaking Harry for the next week.

    Thank you for this beautiful story!
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  • From storylistener on September 01, 2007
    This was *sniff* the most *sniff* BEAUTIFUL story I have ever read. Some parts made me blush, but it was a good blush. WONDERFUL JOB!
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  • From puccachu on August 29, 2007
    omgosh
    absolutely delicious!!
    sucha swt story
    sucha swt ending
    i'm in love =3
    can't describe how good, how touching this story is
    loved it alot!

    on a weird note~
    i'm part mongolian hmm its too funnie hearing temujin in the story lol
    awesomeness
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  • From ChibiDragoonrose on August 22, 2007
    Bloody hell!!!! It's ****ing awesome, really. I think this fic is one of the best I've ever read out of master/slave fics. At first, Farid's accent written down puts me off since i have to read a second time to understand what's being said. However as i read on i come to understand that it's unique and it's Farid. I wonder that it's be better to call him Harry after all of them'd known that farid is harry - but then again even though farid is harry; harry is just a name not farid who has lived his life with that name. Also, I think it's really sweet and heartwarming, not to mention that farid is really strong after all that rapes and all. I felt like hexing severus with the most cruellest hex when he added salt to the wound after the incident with Nott, but he make up for it to farid. I wish there's mpreg, it's make the story much more cuter. Please continue writing, ne. Ja ne.
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  • From purpleismagic on August 13, 2007
    This story is beautiful. It's probably the best Severus/Harry I've ever read, and I've read a lot. The character development is perfect. And I have to say that I loved the last line, about swans mating for life. It was just so cute.
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  • From zuerlein2001 on March 18, 2007
    Have to say I was so glad to get to finish this. I lost my computer and so I lost all the stories I had started and had to start finding them and when I found this one agian I started over from the beginning. I enjoyed it as much as the first time and really enjoyed the other ten chapters that brought it to an end. Way to go.
    K.
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  • From ANON - Nubby on March 12, 2007
    that is such a beautiful end to a beutiful story, mi luv, xxxx
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  • From ANON - Aqua on March 09, 2007
    Wow... I have no words. That was just such a perfect ending. your an amazing writer.
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  • From ANON - jean on March 08, 2007
    thank you. i enjoyed this story very much and look forward to more of your work.
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  • From darkmoore on March 08, 2007
    Alright, it is 2.30 am and I just finished reading your story... in one go... 11 hours or so (had to stop for eating and such, but otherwise...) I have to congratulate you on this story. It's really wonderfully written and quite original. I enjoyed it greatly - why else would I be still awake? Good job! I hop e to read more of you, soon.

    Mel
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  • From ANON - thalia on March 08, 2007
    that was absolutely lovely. Thank you for sharing your talent.
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  • From Jan on March 08, 2007
    AAAHHHHHH! What a beautiful ending. Almost made me cry. I loved the whole swan thing, nice touch. I absolutely love this fiction. Great work. Hope I see another great story soon. ^__^
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