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Reviews for Summer After Year Six.

By : madlodger
  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2006
    I LOVE IT! you're really good at writing and I hope to read more of this story
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2006
    I like the premise of the story, with Draco covering his elven heritage and features to attend Hogwarts, and his need for a mate. The twist of him needing to be pure to receive his adult powers leaves a funny frustrated but still arrogant boy with great potential for the story.

    I did notice a lot of spelling mistakes and / or incorrect word usage such as "Draco was depraved of the most basic freedom" I think you mean "deprived" and "witches disquize" and "disquize like it's happend" both should be "disguise" and "like it happened", shaddered - shuddered.

    You also need to make sure you use complete sentences rather than sound bites, it will flow better and be easier to read.

    DO you have a beta? If not make sure you run a spell check and grammar check once you finish each chapter. This can pick up most of the more obvious errors.



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  • From ANON - crio on October 29, 2006
    huh, kool, i like it
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  • From SlashySnitch on October 29, 2006
    This is great! I can't wait until you update, but I haev seen significant errors in your writing. Need a Beta? I can Beta for you...email me at SlashySnitch@aim.com and let me know; I'm great with spelling and grammar. Check my stories and see!
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